Ow, this was great! Loved Doumeki! xD
Really good. =]

How romantic! Who knew that Doumeki had it in him?

CALL THE POLICE
IT'S GODDAMN FREAKIN' AWESOME!KYA~

ZOMG!
THAT WAS SO AWESOME! I LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLE!WRITE MORE!

luv
blazing-chan

This was too awesome for words! (Yummy Doumeki in a suit...)
Donuts foreverXD

Yay!! Much softer than most fics with these two...Cute.

That was very nicely written. I really enjoyed reading it. ^_^

nice...it was hot and it made my day. heheh

I have now turned into a pile of mushy goo! Ohh! This Donut fic just pushed all the right buttons! *SQUE!* So suave, that Shizuka! If I had a guy come onto me like that...! *gets dizzy* Wata-chan, you lucky man! XD Love this oneshot, it's cute and very sexy at the same time! Great work!

That was so overly-romantic, but it pulled at my heartstrings and I loved it to bits. Thanks for writing it!

I liked it. The only thing that really bothered me, is the second person POV, the flow is somewhat off. Something like this works better in first or third. First person because it's obviously in Watanuki's POV, but that would make it first person, really, which is categorized by the use of "I, me," as pronouns; or Third, because it looks like the author is sending out hints of what Doumeki is thinking which inches more towards third person.

Just my thoughts. It's still really good, just odd the way it's written.

... Y'know, this is the first Doumeki-Watanuki story I've read and wow. Loved it. Not only was Doumeki really seducing (which, in my opinion, was rather scary, OOC, yet somehow... how should I say this? Hot?) but the fact that Watanuki-kun acts so girlish around him makes me laugh ^-^ I have this thing about voicing out the different parts for stories I read, but when I came across the restaurant part, I laughed at myself for being such an idiot and stopped. It was really THAT hard to say stuff in a husky voice. (... 'Specially if you're a girl. LOL XD)

wow! that's all I can say! Doumeki is such a *player* and so good.
I would be drowling also.

good job on it. wow.

Thoroughly enjoyable. ^^

Wonderful and sexy.

Watanuki was easily to seduce. ;) *hehe* Their talk in the restaurant was great. I loved it.