NO! You have to write more, so I know if he lives or dies! Please?!

aw... how sad... but i loved it!!

LEO DIDNT DIE! and im sticking with that. a magical fairy popped out of nowhere and healed him. and thats the reall ending. isee why you didnt want to put that part in because a magical fairy? thats kinda weird...amoung other things. but anyway...thats how it ended! and im sticking with it!

Wow. This was really good. It would be cool if you wrote a sequel (where Leo lives!). It was really moving.

don' let leonardo died I always hate it when my heros died so please don,t let him died please let leo live

oh that was great i love how it leaves you there to make a decision for yourself! :)

what happens to leo

oh! SO good! -ish tearing- ...if you ever get a chance i'd love for you to write an alternate story based on if he had lived. I'd be very curious to see how badly he was hurt, can he still walk/ move like he had beent rained to, how does he deal with that etc.


if ya eveer do be sure and send it to me. it was so good!

I'm on the verge of tears! It was good, sad but I thought it was kind of sweet, in a way. I liked it.

i like this one shot. it still leaves you thinking after you've read it, amking up your own version of what happens. i like the way this story ends!- oh yeah, it isn't too short. it's fine

Oh...my...*dabs eyes with tissue*

I positively loved it! Very sweet and in character.

Congrats on the Stealthy Stories nomination.

-Jaganashi aka Kismet

WOW! this is...that was...this is. wow this is just plain and pure awesome! it was so sad and touching. and koodos on the open ending like you did. great job.

I'm very impressed. I don't see a whole lot of Mike/Leo stories and this one certainly was fantastic. Open ending stories are hard to end well, and you did. Bravo.

Oh, you are really good at tragedy! The implied death is possibly more powerful than it would have been had you spelled it out! And I loved the little Leo/Raph story...Leo would do something like that. Excellent story! Really, if you feel like continuing it, I would love to read it, but it is great as it is!

He did not die. I repeat: He did not die. There - I've settled it.