interesting

here i thought it was just fine the way it was. oh well, i am sure what ever you do to it it will turn out wonderful.

Alright, who the hell said something?

Wow. I had this much of an impact on the story? Wow. I feel special. I do admit that there probably were people who didn't appreciate their virginity. I suppose in my mind, a princess would be forced to value her virginity. But then, of all the princesses, Minako would be the least likely to value her virginity. I actually can't believe your'e re-writing this story on account of me. I really feel special. Well, I'll stop rambling now.

Don't worry aout it! It's a very good story! I just hope you update it soon. (I've just added it to my favorites) Are we gonna see some Senshi action in here? Even if you don't have it, it's still a wonderful fic. Please update!

-Tsuki

OHMYGOD! THAT WAS...WOW! PLEASE KEEP THIS UP!

-Tsuki

IE! I LOVE THIS! It has just the PERFECT amount of fluffy! *sigh*... If only Yuki...What? Sorry! lol. I love a good romance, and Serena and Endymion are the perfect couple. Please keep writing!

This is neat! I can't wait to continue! I love the scene with Endymion! (If only my crush were like that *sigh*)

whatever makes you happy.

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That...was...different. The girls are all fourteen, right? Why is Minako having sex? I know you're going to say that it's because she loves Kunzite but...it just doesn't work. In older days, one of the only prizes a woman had was her virginity. They didn't give that up so easily. I'll also say what I said for the last chapter. You're modernizing it. Karaoke? Dollars? Those things were non existent until MUCH later. To me, this story doesn't seem very realistic. Everything seems very choppy and unfinished.

It's good but it doesn't seem all that realistic. I'm not sure how to describe what I mean. Maybe it's the fact that out of nowhere she starts having feelings for Endymion or maybe it's the fact that she's only fourteen and dreaming of fairy tale romances. But then I suppose a lot of girls do that. Wow. I feel old. Or maybe it's because it seems to modern. I think that's it. You kept using the term making out and a lot of modern language. I think when you write a story that takes place in the distant past, you need to use words that relate to that time period. Then, there was Endymion cleaning up the glass. I like that cute scene where she's fixing up his hand but back then, you would have had servants to do all that. I don't think you would have a princess stop to perform first aid. I really like this story but I think you need to step back and think in the time.

Very cute. I'm just confused about something. Serenity and her mother are royals therefore live in a palace. Wouldn't it make more sense to have people staying in their own rooms? I'm sure there would be guest rooms in a palace. That's my only complaint. I love the rest. Impressive.

i think you did a reeally good job on this chapter keep it up and update soon please :)

Ouch, poor Sere but she will over come it..hopefully...

so sad! poor serenity, and endy? man what was he thinkin? i hope things are better for her later and her and minako make up.