THIS IS FANTASTIC! Amazing! Wonderful! I'm running out of superlatives! notices Ken standing nearby* And how did you end up with Ken as a muse! IT's NOT FAIR!!! *Runs to a corner and cries* Oh well. And stay away from PC cola. That stuff is eviler than the dub Eli. (Is eviler eve a word?)

that is GOOD. in the beginning, it didnt really sound like eriol...but i still like it.

Sweet! Sugoi! Kakwe! Etc! I loved it! Of course, Eriol-kun is my fave chara, but that don't make no diff. That was awesome!

I loved it. Continue it! PLEASE!

oooooo...sugoi earth-chan!!!!!

This is so kawii! it is a real original. Is there going to be sequal? Plase say yes

Cool! It's rare to find any speculation about Eriol's background. I hope you'll write more about him, Clow and the four Guardians.

This was interesting. I've gotten far too use to eveeel Eriol. Easy to forget that our baka kenshin was once a child. With a past. It's nice to see fics that focus on him separate from his Clow-ness.

That was soooo good! There are like NO stories about Eriol-kun's past... and this is a possible scenery of how Eriol-kun became 'Clow'. That was wonderful!

That's a great portrayal of Serious!Eriol. ^^ Pretty good fic all round.

true, but different in a very good way. ^^ i've always wondered about eriol's childhood, and i guess this is one spectacular way of saying one theory. great!

this is sooooooooooooo cool! love it love it love it. a great eriol fic

Ah, so nice, just gotta luv Eriol *_* I think it's actually supposed to be that he's the same aga as Fujitaka and just stopped himself from aging beyond Sakura's age so that he could stalk her and stuff (which makes the Kaho thing a... little less horrible ^^;) but, um, whatever ^_^; I'm not gonna let canon interfere with a perfectly good fanfic XD XD I think I need to get some sleep now.

No no, the Osaka accent on Kero-chan makes him /that/ much more adorable. ^.^ Good job on this fic...kinda reminds me of Sakura's "Eriol" actually. An incredible insight on Eriol-becoming-Clow-Read (not that they're many of those fics out there anyways). And the PC cola doesn't give anybody a sugar high. I should know...silverlight