Nice story you've got, here C:
I wonder what it would feel (and taste, as well) to chew on a firecracker. It sounds weird. It really does.
Well, I'm looking forward to when you update again! It's been a while, now hasn't it?

Love,
Pathetic

this is pretty good
u should make a follow up

YUMMY.

I really like this story.
It's definitely different from the others I've read and the leisure pace of the events makes it a very relaxing read.
Anyway, I hope you haven't abandoned this story and will update it soon. But if it means chapters of this quality, you take all the time you need.

aw cute

Intriguing story :) Rather interesting perspective. Me like. Looking good, update asap please!

This is really very interesting. Axel's addicted to fire-crackers, I never saw that one coming, even by the title I assumed it held no relation to the fic. Stupid me I suppose.

Anyways, this has me entertained so please continue. I don't think Roxas is out of character one bit, you're doing a fine job.

Write more now, or I'll fill your inbox with lit fireworks. XD

Awesome! Roxas didn't seem OOC at all!! I love him and Axel both for being so cute!! Yes for Akuroku!! Update soon!!

LOVED IT
write more
i ned it to fill my addiction
hahahahahaha
but seriously man,
it was great, you're too ** yourself

... UPDATE SOON!! I was getting so used to "the next chapter", thenit was chapter 4, and I /wanted/ a "the next chapter"! I mean, gosh! YAY! AKUROKU-NESS!

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YAYS n ALL!

Aww, that's sweet. ^^ Yay for Axel and sharing his 'addiction' of firecrackers with Roxas! I *heart* your story, so please, keep up the great work! *Adds story to her Favorites list*

~ Akuroku 55
~*AkuRoku 4 Eva*~

This is a great story so far, and I have to say I don't often review people's stories. Its really original, and although Roxas is slightly OOC, it works well with the plot. I especially like how its sort of a modern high school story, but it has a different feel to it. By the way, I noticed at the bottom that you were asking about spelling/grammar? I didn't notice any mistakes, but if don't have a beta and would like one, just ask. I am slightly strict about spelling and grammar.

I think you're doing a good job with this story. I love how it's written. I think you're staying true to roxas. He is mello as Organization 13 Roxas is kinda more emo but they're both mello. Axel tends to be more flashy. anyway thumbs up XD nice work bucko

well, axel isn't the most loveable person ever 8D i mean. he's such a backstabber, haha.
but all for his dear little roxy, right? :3

This is cool. I like it. Especially the whole chewing-on-firecrackers thing. Its a lot calmer than some fics, but its nice. Keep it up.