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| Bonzai1990 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseI... I loved that story... I don't know how to put into words of what I'm trying to say... I loved the way it was realistic (well to the game's standard anyway) How Rikku does end up moving on eventually... Because I find it rather saddening and annoying you could say, how People pair Rikku up with Auron and then Auron gets sent... Then Rikku refuses to love anyone else for the rest of her life... and she's what? only 15/16? And rikku dreams of having lots of kids... in which she can't with a dead guy that has been sent... {hey! but that doesn't mean she can't still love Auron, she just has to move on and love someone else...} I got a little off track there.. oops! anywho! I also liked the fact that Her child died.. no I'm not cruel! It just also realistic - Since Auron was an unsent when Rikku and he obviously made love... it kinda impossible for a child to be half alive and half unsent so it was only umm realistic that the child didn't make it! btw... what's with the words in brackets? is it a song? if so... who sang it? |
| Leaflette 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is so beautiful! You've officially converted me into an Auron/Rikku fan. :) |
| katharine 2006-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseit was good like chicken! |
| Tinuviel's Song 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abuseAw, you made me cry... Good show |
| Laele Helviiryn 2006-05-04 ch 1, | abuseT_T |
| Lady of the Thorn 2006-04-25 ch 1, | abuseYay for more Aurikku. Loved it. |
| PrincessSerenity110 2006-04-23 ch 1, | abuseWow that was one of the most beautiful storys I read. I cryed at the Im sorry for loving you part. It was sad and beautiful and after I read it all I could say was Wow. So overall it was great. Torr Gaol Bho Princeserenity110 |
| Ruki The Sake Fairy 2006-04-21 ch 1, | abusewow that was really sad |
| Farther 2006-04-19 ch 1, | abuseEhehe... I totally agree with you about Auron not doing anything with Rikku beyond a kiss - but I admit that I adore the idea of them having a son together :) Your take on it, with the baby not being able to survive was very interesting, though. And very sad - loved Rikku's last words to Auron. So poignant! Great fic :) |
| Gining 2006-04-19 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, that was just wonderful to read. Though I only wish you would have gone more into how she felt about loosing the baby. But oh well, she was more worried about what Auron would think anyway, maybe? But shouldn't he have been there too? Ah, I think too much. But I did enjoy it! Gin |
| rr1963 2006-04-19 ch 1, | abuseI don't particularly _like_ sad stories (and the aurikku, um, genre, certainly has a bunch) but this was a well written, effective story that tugged at the heartstrings. You drew a really believable Rikku about as well as you can in a one-shot. Nice going. |
| Bacon 2006-04-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseOk, I already left you a comment on LJ, but I wanted to point out some specific things I LOVED. “We had a son,” she said, finally, without opening her eyes. “I named him after you… I guess I shouldn’t have done that…” She squeezed her eyes together tightly and brought her fists up to rub them, coming away wet. “He didn’t live very long. I guess, he just wasn’t… real enough.” Her green eyes opened. “He faded, a bit different than you, though, I guess…” she chuckled dryly. “I never even knew if he liked cake…” Yes. This was where I cried. Honestly cried. And I DO NOT cry. Ever. The cake thing just pushed me over the edge. |
| Shido21 2006-04-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is Darkpoet303 from the Aurikku group. Excellent story. I agree with your final author's note. I can't imagine Auron doing anything more than kiss Rikku, but despite that, I really enjoyed your story. Your imagery is awesome. You convey Rikku's deep sorrow very well and you don't go for one of those false happy endings, though those are great too. :D I really love the part where you have Auron say "Open your eyes." It's a great way of ending things the way they began. Good job. :) |