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Seirei Nightlord05
2009-06-10 . chapter 7
Hi...Like the story...please tell me when this story is going to be updated...I awaited the next chapter...Bye2...
surfergirl19
2009-01-05 . chapter 7
More please(Holding out hands).Please update this story!It's very good.Putting this on my fav's list!:)
Paradise Island Tanzania
2008-03-22 . chapter 7
update soon
Paradise Island Tanzania
2008-03-21 . chapter 1
hi
coolbreezes
2007-05-14 . chapter 7
This story is bloody hilarious! I can't wait to see who wins the poker match, or what happens when the Kaibas and others meet!. My favorite part has to be when they were going over the emergency procedures and the Titanic comments... I was laughing so hard tears were coming. One simple request: more Seto please! I think that the story could be so much funnier with Seto - the others trying to get a rise out of him or something. Ra, I am such a Seto fangirl...

Keep up the great work!
Spirit Chu
2007-04-15 . chapter 7
...UPDATE ALREADY!

God I don't even think you've updated your other stories yet. Admit it, you are becoming a full time YAOI fan girl. GR.

DUDE! Your little sis is dieing of YYxA withdrawls! TYPE girl, TYPE!

Anyways I'm really liking this story so far. Marik is awesome. You gotta love those pyscho bitches.

MWHAHAHA even though I know how most of this story is going to go (you told me so many times) I like to read it from time to time. Especially the YYxA parts -insert fan girl squeal-

ANYWAY see you later big sis!

Luvs,
Chu
Rachel
2006-08-28 . chapter 7
I'm glad I can tell you how much I love your stories, not only this one but the others.My favorite are "Revival of the heart" and "the Prince of orichalchos". I just create my profile on fanfiction and I hope to write and post some stories that can be as wonderful and dreaming as yours! You have a real talent of writing and I want to thank you for making my days brighter since the beginning!Yeah, really thanks!You have a lot of things in mind, I can say by your chapters!Big imagination and a great style of writing!I'd love to see more stories of you (only AtemuXAnzu, no offense, but I can't stand yaoi, I know you like the pairing YamiXYugi, but I can't imagine a boy with another boy, that sounds so wrong to me!But that's my personal opinion and I respect yours!)However, please, could you update this story!I want to see what happens next!
feyannabellee
2006-07-24 . chapter 7
A fine chapter, I love it and the previous one. Our resident psychos getting wasted was very amusing. If Bakura loses, he has to be nice to Ryou. We'll see how well that goes, maybe he'll even open up a bit.

I can't wait to see how this interesting vacation continues. More soon!
Umibreezeforever
2006-07-23 . chapter 7
luv it! cant wait for the next ch!! more Yami/Anzu please!!
luv ya
SB
OceanOfMemories19
2006-07-19 . chapter 7
Gambling? Well that's a new one, I loved this one! Now I get why those three always get along, they're Psycho's!

Update,

Selene
hanayo
2006-07-19 . chapter 7
Yaoi?! Okay I am certainly not a fan of that but I also accept your decision... besides as you said, there will be few, right?
Anyway I think Bakura love his hikari (obviously in your fic!) And if Malik wins (of course he will wiN! bakura's damn drunk!) Bakura will force himself to treat his hikari nicely and their relationship progessess! ( am I right?) Enough of my curiousity in yaoi!
I notice that you make your Desert Aqua is well-balanced. For example, in this chapter, the next scene is all about Ryou's feelings towards his yami, and yet, he didnt mention this in the previous chapters...
And in your other previous chapters, you make a big focus on Yami who dreamt of Atemu, which is a mysterious thing.And also the previous chapter (which is chapter 6) shows that Ishizu and the gang came to the scene, shocked to see Marik with them. Each chapter shows each character in their problems and something like that! (dunno what to say!) And I notice that every chapter reveals something and every chapter had great surprises!
MAn I talk to much about this thing!

Anyway, my question of how MArik get out of the shadow realm hadnt been revealed yet... so I have to wait for that time then... And I guessed that your next chapter is all about Yami and the gang heading to the theater ( I bet that your next chapter might be long!) ANyway, you should at least see some scenes for Mokuba please ( I dont care of that ra forsaking Seto Kaiba! Obviously, he was typing in his damn laptop!) And also I thought Mai will come to the scene so Joey also had romantic scenes for himself. Anyway, I notice, where is Duke? I hadnt been seeing him for a long time!! Wow I asked too much! And I had school today! Maybe I have to make this quick! Gotta go, authoress I am still busy with my damn studies! ( I am not really a nerd, really! Just doing mom a favor!) MAn this review is kinda short! Sorry authoress! This is the best that I can do! Cheerio! We were rooting for ya! You rock, authoress!
Maridel
2006-07-18 . chapter 7
This was great... I can't wait... for the next update... ^0^
Elfbrat18
2006-07-18 . chapter 7
Ya know I figured out the one reason why having this computer in my room is a bad idea. It's when I read chapters like this that have me laughing so hard my mom hears me in the kitchen and she hollers back, "What in the hell is so funny?" and I can't begin to explain it to her. [You might want to add a warning like: Do not drink any liquid when reading this chapter. Doing so may result in liquid flying out though the nostrils and across the room.] Speaking from experience are we? [Oh yeah.] Ishizu's being really stubborn, Yugi and Anzu sure as hell is hot ain't falling for it, and for the love of all that is holy Joey really needs to shut his mouth when he's eating! [I think he's got a tapeworm..] Oh a cheesburger sounds good. So does McDonalds. Oh, oh, a Big Mac from McDonalds; I haven't had one of those in a while. [I think you have a tapeworm, hun.] Or a high metabolism. Hm, which view is Yami enjoying, Anzu, or the view outside the windows? 8D [Oh don't start with that, it's too late at night.] What can I say, I'm a big fan of Revolutionshipping. [I support it too, but I got the biggest laugh I've had today reading the part with Malik, Marik, Bakura, and Odion.] Me too! Omg, this bit alone would make a hilarious episode, granted it'd have to be put on the Adult Swim cause 4Kids would have an anuerism if they read this, but that's their problem-we love it! An insane little bastard over an insane little bastard with Shadow Magic powers? *weighs options* Either way he's up to no good, but at least now he can't send anyone to the Shadow Realm. [Yeah, I guess that makes sense... Holy crap! If anyone I knew sucked down 8 Bloody Maries or anywhere near 17 martinis they wouldn't be getting off the floor for days!] It's never good when a tomb keeper, his pyschotic dark, and a tomb robber get slammed. Although it makes for one hell of a funny chapter. [I'm not going to say anything about the millennium rod bit. The jokes could get me into so much trouble.] And adding 'bit' to 'millennium rod' wasn't that bad? *scrolls down* Hey Whistler, does that say something about Odion feeling lucky? [..uh..yeah, which can only mean..] *both scream* Not an image I wanted before I went to bed! [Oh god my eyes!] The image of a rabbit on speed eating a celery stick doesn't help either, but I'm still giggling. Replace the rabbit with Bakura and I'm on the floor laughing my ass off. [Ok, here's one for you: Imaging these three, Malik, Marik, and Bakura on speed and fishing in the same day.] Like Marik wasn't twitchy enough. And oh, a sweet kinda shonen-ai moment with Ryou and Malik (if you look at it that way). I can read it either way and it doesn't bother me, so long as it doesn't get overly disturbing. [I read it like they've been best friends, and Malik not wanting to see anything bad happen to one of his friends, but I suppose it could go either way. *sneezes*] Bless you. [Thanks.] ... [...] ...Boogityboogityboogity!... [Random.] Yeah I had a brainfart, damn, what was I gonna say? [*shrugs* I dunno but I like the twist Malik made on the bet with Bakura.] THAT'S IT! Marcy, you've made egg soup! I'm really looking forward to seeing how this turns out, and what Ishizu is going to do to Odion if she finds them.

Elfbrat18 8D & Whistler :D
spiritfire
2006-07-14 . chapter 6
he torture
hanayo
2006-07-13 . chapter 6
Oh my god! I am so sorry that i hadnt review on your desert auqa! I didnt realize that you already updated the next one! Gome! Gome! Gome! *bowing to the authoress repeateadly*

Several Hours later after all the bowing:

Authoress, i was suprised to see MArik in the story even though, he was supposedly in the shadow realm (maybe i just wait for the next chapter so i could know the anzwer!) anyway, though it's short but i still like it! No, not like, I TOTALLY LOVE IT! i know why you made it short since it really depends on the name of the chappie, ne, authoress? ^__^ i can't wait for your next update!
Wow, Yami was outraged at the sight of Bakura! o_O and it's really getting worst since Marik came to the scene!
Now anzu's getting worried of Yami, Tristan who couldnt get over with the stain in his pants, Yami having dreams of Atemu, Ishizu, a curator, who couldnt stop worshipping Yami, Arnold-look-alike suddenly appeared in your story and what's next? Jack Sparrow came to conquer the ship? (hehehe just kidding!) lot's and lot's of things going to happened to desert aqua! and i can tell! Speaking of Jack Sparrow, i better watch the POTC:Dead Man's chest! Omigod! it's now showing! Must go to the movies! Buy pop corn and soda and jump to the farthest seat in the cinema! But problem is: I AM DAMN BROKE! I waste my money for a gallon of ice cream and some of duel monster booster packs (Man it really helps me! Now time to beat my bro's sorry ass!) but i can't do that for now, since my bro's playing a new ps2 game he bought right now. I really don't know the title of that game but it's a little bit interesting, but i dont deserved to play that game. Since only patient people can! -_-
anyway, back to my crisis! Hm what should Roxas do in KH2 if he is broke? Work in the Odd jobs then! But that's impossible, i can't make fast money over that! *bulb lights on top of Akira's head* i know! Be right back! *went to her room and came back, carrying a piggy bank*
*Cries* Sorry piggy bank, but this is for your own good, oh well, desperate times comes from desperate measures... Piggy bank i would like you to meet my old friend, the Hammer. *Showing the piggy bank the hammer*
and i swear that this won't hurt a bit! *and whacks the piggy bank with the hammer thousands of times* Cool! I can watch it YAY! so gotta go now, before that i thank you for your update, authoress! Hope you can finish this thing! ^__^ So C ya!
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