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| Michael Howard 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuseA short but extremely well done look at Kim and Ron a decade, or probably more, from the start of the TV series. However, the basic framework of their future world saving partnership is already in place: Ron's imagination, Kim's exceptional physical abilities, and also a complete and absolute devotion to one another's wellbeing. Good stuff! |
| Halfbl00dA1chemist 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abusethat was absolutely adorable! What a cute story!! I loved it. You should make a sequel to this idea. Very good story! |
| neithan 2006-12-14 ch 1, | abusehi, i just wanted to say, I have really enjoyed reading your "the end" story, so I'm going back and reading all of your work. I loved this story, how ron reacted was sweet. anyway, keep up the good work! |
| CastaS 2006-11-12 ch 1, | abusegreat story, i enjoyed it much. |
| Brother to Vorlons 2006-04-24 ch 1, | abuseNow this is a terrific example of what Kim and Ron must have been like at this age in order to turn out to be the people they did. I especially like how their friendship somewhat alienated other kids their own age, which in turn reinforced their friendship - they weren't pulled away by kids who wanted to do other things. (Until Josh Mankey shows up, anyway. When does Kim first crush on him?) I think some of the introspection is a little deep for kids this age, but it feels more like it's coming from unusually bright, insightful kids, whereas in your other story "Raiders of the Afikomen" they seemed more like adults trying to emulate kids. I'll definitely be watching for your future stories. |
| Waffled Flambe 2006-04-23 ch 1, | abuseaw, how sweet! it's going in my favs. oh, and you can thank MrDrP for me checking out this story! |
| ffloty 2006-04-22 ch 1, | abuseah, so, sweet |
| surforst 2006-04-22 ch 1, | abuseA very well written one-shot and I must say I good read. I like the whole distrust towards the rollerblades and the interaction between young Ron and Kim. A good read overall and I'm looking forward to more. |
| kemiztri 2006-04-21 ch 1, | abuseThat is, without a doubt, one of the most adorable stories I've ever read. Awesome work. Their 6-yr-old personalities were perfect. |
| GargoyleSama 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abuseOkay everyone all at once, Aw. Sweet touching story. Nicely pulled off. |
| conan98002 2006-04-19 ch 1, | abuseheh cute |
| Tormax 2006-04-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is so sweet! |
| MrDrP 2006-04-19 ch 1, | abuseAnother sweet little story about Kim and Ron's early years. I really enjoyed the dynamics between our two six year old heroes -- your portrayal of young K & R rings true, bringing to mind vivid images. You offered a very insightful observation as to why neither had many other friends. Fortunately, each did, and continues to, provide what the other needs to be happy. In closing, this was tender, but it also had some funny moments (this is the first time the word 'gangrene' has ever elicited a chuckle from this reader) and properly fraught ones, too. Well done! |
| Bubbahotek 2006-04-19 ch 1, | abuseNow that''s a cute little story. I do enjoy the childhood stories and yours is a very good one. Bubba |
| campy 2006-04-19 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet and cute. Ron always has been prone to drama. I really like the "I'll need like $100 million dollars" bit. |