Reviews for Midnight Insomnia

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Ruingaraf 2007-10-15 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful. That's all I can say. You totally captured how much Roy NEEDS her. More than he needs food or water or sleep, he needs to come back to her and hear that it's all okay, even if it's just empty words. And she's happy to give it to him.
Kurissyma san Tybalt 2007-06-10 ch 1,	abuseLol, my friend Emz is in love with the Roy/Ed shipping and I just don't get it. I mean, you can't even defend 'em by saying "opposites attract" because they're actually of very similar temperaments! Both refuse beyond anything to be put down, hot tempers... Ed's just a little (read: a lot) shorter. This was such a fantastically well-written piece though- totally awesome =P Instant fave =P
Bizzy 2007-01-04 ch 1,	abuse"...and tries to comfort himself with the knowledge that Riza's promises are never broken." That line...made me want to cry. Beautifully written. This wasn't about smut, it was about the things behind it. Please keep writing!!
Arantzain 2006-12-01 ch 1,	abuse"Let these dreams be not foreshadowing, let this one moment hold." This line is poetry. The rest of the work is beautiful, gripping. But that line puts me in mind of Catullus. Lovely work. -Rantza
Ama Uzume 2006-11-01 ch 1,	abuseShort but sweet! I like.
Riza Hawkeye 9 2006-10-25 ch 1,	abusehey !! nice fic , for your first lemon you did it pretty well , i love it because its not just smut , its lovely too , congratulations ! and let me say that i really like your storys, please keep writing them !!:) congrats again ! bye
Elemental Transmutation 2006-09-14 ch 1,	abuseWhoa! blush It's not that I haven't read lemons before, it's just that every time I read them I, well... blush. I mean, you were probably completely scarlet writing that. I, personally, don't think I'll ever write a lemon. Mostly because I'm afraid my mother will find it. I think it may have rushed a bit, probably due to embarrassment, but otherwise it was very well written.
Lyny Angell 2006-06-10 ch 1,	abuseWell, first of all, and I do realize you noticed this yourself, 32 hyphens in one fic... not good. Not good at all. lol. Other than that, a very good fic. I certainly enjoyed it! Love from Lyny Angell
Joanie S. 2006-05-30 ch 1,	abuseThat was lovely. I love Roy angsting ;)
Arhena 2006-05-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseLoved this. Fluent language... good narration... loved the idea of Roy being afraid of losing Riza... you weren't out of character at all. Though I would suggest you watch out your consistency when writing. In some parts the writing became less-formal and then suddenly switched to the old writing, it made me giggle at times. Another suggestion: don't use words like "cock" if you're writing a story like this. It sucks out all the angst and romance of the moment. Other than that it is great overall. I love it!
Flye 2006-05-03 ch 1,	abuseWow... I'm disappointed at myself for not spending much of my times in the Royai fandom-(I've found another obsession, other than Royai: Neji/Tenten from Naruto)- because then, I would've found this. This was beautifully written. His emotions were so realistic, and he seemed almost desperate. I guess I would be too if I dreamt of someone I loved dying. You've got powerful words. And the smut was nice. To tell you the truth, I haven't read one in a really LONG time. It was nice to read this because it was well written for your first time writing a lemon. And also... I hadn't noticed until you mentioned it. You DO use a lot of hyphens XD :]
Cles 2006-04-24 ch 1,	abuseWow... (wipes away a tear) that was so beautiful... (sniffles) I had no idea that you were such an amazing writter! Makes me feel a bit self concious about my writting :D
Melitza 2006-04-22 ch 1,	abuseIt's good, especially for a first lemon. Not extremely explicit, but instead classy in its allusions and gentle narration. Love the Royai, and I can definitely see Roy being haunted. And I especially love the ending, about Roy taking comfort in the fact that Riza's promises are never broken...
mylovemiroku 2006-04-22 ch 1,	abuseWow. You're right. There aren't that many GOOD Royai fics. Be happy knowing you're one of them, because this was great. You start right off in the little world that all of us fans have invented: Roy and Riza are together. It's hard for people to lead up to it, without sounding cliche, so why don't fics start there more often? It puzzles me too. I look forward to reading your other one-shots.
rizahawkeye21 2006-04-20 ch 1,	abusesomewhat sad yet 'comforting'. a nice job done here. it would've been nice to hear what Riza thought about his nightmares... in any case great job so keep writing!

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