Beautiful. Wonderful. Perfect.

Rosey

*breaks down into tears* that's short but sweet and sad! i'm listening to "a Little Fall of Rain" now, and i broke into tears the first time i heard it...how sad for poor Eponine to die in the arms of her beloved, her love for him unreturned...

I love all Eponine fanfiction, and this one is no exception. Good job.
Regards,
-rachel

that's pretty depressing ... you in a sad mood when you wrote that I guess, but that was pretty tight.

Good concept with the "And rain" - reminds me vaguely of a piece for choir I once heard. The odd thing is that it is so obvious what you did...had a brilliant idea for a poem ending and wrote it down, then padded it out a bit with a beginning. o.O If you ever think of a stronger beginning, I'd recommend you write it down. But keep that ending!

I'm sure you were writing what you felt while hearing the song, but it's rather insubstantial - mostly repeating lyrics or short musings. It could be enhanced so much more.

How sad...:( that's such a sad song, and i like how you interpreted it

sniff sniff soo sad, i hate how eponine dies she's the kewlest character and she doesn't deserve to die... good story

I absolutly ADORED it!

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Sweet... cool poem ::Loves the Song this is named after:: Dont you fret, M'siur Marius, I dont feel any pain... A little fall of rain ::Goes singing off into the night::

I like this, but it's too much taken from the song - also, it's short.

Good use of stream-of-consciousness type writing. The thoughts really fit what I think she would have been feeling at that time.

I tend to agree with Merseault. It does want work.

Not bad, but since it's taken more or less directly from the song it's not all that interesting, either.

Please stop writing such sad things! I saw this show over the weekend- WICKED GOOD!