This was an excellent story. Your usage of quotes was appropriate and powerful, and your descriptions of Vader's thought and POV were very well-done. Many stories that are a certain POV of a movie scene tend to be just lame recitations of the script, but yours was nothing like that: it was really as though Vader was remembering his past, all in flashes, and the detail and realism of his reaction...All I know is that this is a very well-written POV story that perfectly encapsulates what Vader must have felt during that scene.

Ai! This is amazing! The emotions are so perfectly fitting, and it really makes sense. Loved it!

That was awesome! Spectacular! *Laughs for joy* I love the way you bring into the light what Vader was thinking. Your story is going on my favorites list right now!

This makes SO much sense, man. Especially the part where he realises that everyone he loved was taken away by Sidious 'in the guise of giving him what he wanted'. Loved the flashback bits too. Superb, dear, simply superb.