wow it still makes absolutely no sense whatsoever.

Disturbing but exceptionally good. Loved the detail.

uh...i'm confused

The vagueness works... it left me thinking about what the sentences meant. Lol. And also how this fic seems VERY Ty Lee. I love it!

No matter how jossed this was, it's still beautiful and it still works because it's so perfectly Ty Lee that details (a nearly throwaway sentence in one episode, blink and you miss it) don't matter. You captured the feel very well. I think at points it is a bit too vague, I had to reread several spots to get a grasp of what was happening, but at the same time that kind of works.

Interesting take on her family. This is the only fic that I've foudn that talks about them, and you sure make them... unusual. Kind of reminds me of Running With Scissors.

I love the diction and the style of writing. Kind of stream-of-conciousness, but understandable. You have a lot of little intricacies and details that are very 'Ty Lee.'

There's a lot more I'd like to say, but it's hard to put into words because I am not very poetic :c

I'm slightly confused as to why it was blank, but I have an idea it may be because education 'stifles the creative process', and thus Ty Lee would learn nothing. Nice work.

"A four week trip takes five months because odes to the wind are relevant and the grass absolutely must be painted."

absolutely beautiful poem-prose

This fic is probably the most imaginative , brilliantly written oneshot I've ever read on :0)

I never thought of her parents being well you know artsie craftsie. although i really enjoyed it I Love Ty Lee!

I love LOVE this collaboration of sentences! They're so well put together and deep! I've always wished I had a talent to write deep philosophical things...(alas) ;)

You have given me so much inspiration! Ty Lee is one of the best characters to write.

Love Love,

TipTaps

Gorgeous. Particularly that bit "The woman and man in a red room.." It struck me silly. Honestly, I've always wanted to talk like that in daily conversation.

You've captured everything I like about Ty Lee and made her this ideal of bubbling something or other. It may or may not be hope.

Thanks.

Okay. Before I left you a review that stated it made sense in a vague way. Then I read it again.

And it got better because I got it.

And again, again, again, again, and again.

Now it is one of my absolute favorites. It makes sense - but it's deep, you know? You have to read it over and over (each time for the better) to get it.

This is wonderful. Keep up the fantastic work.

It makes sense in a vague way.

oh I liked this. Especially the colors clashing with her aura bit. Seems very fitting for Ty Lee. Very well done!

Wow. I like that you left more to the imagination, challenging the reader.