aww damn!! c'mon!! you hadda make harry a weirdo magic creature? I was REALLY liking this story until you did that! SICK Daniel Redcliffe with waist long hair? Are you kidding me??

You're writing style is really great, mind you there is the occasional typo but who doesn't have those? I was really really really loving this story!! Stupid creature Harry totally ruined it. GAG ME.

Don't take that the wrong way tho, it's a good story just not my type of story. I hate when harry is some weird creature.

sigh, back to searching for more veela fics w/out magic creature harry.

*walks dejectedly into the sunset*

O my jelly.lolz
so many twist
i luv it!
Seamus wants harry
ron and dean
Maybe hermione and pansy...or blaise??
on to chap 7
xD

~Karma

*Giggles* Hawt.lolz
Ah naughty bad boys those sltheryin men. Arent they??
*smirkz*
luved it.
xD

~Karma

Hawt game.lolz
maybe me adn my Bf should try that...m *Day dreams*
Hawt.
XD

~Karma

I Think i like the suggest pair
Dark haired and "bad boy" type men.lolz
luv the horny hormonal teenagers.lolz
XD

~Karma

Lmao!
" 'Allure?' "

Bang

" 'Harry' "
lmao

Gotta luv ron.

Great.

I only have one negative thing to say. You should've kept Harry's eyes green, that's his most noted feature, it would be like making Draco a red head or making Ron blond. But other then that it's a good story

id like to ask you nicely to take it off completed bc it is not obviously completed.

Tha was a good story, but Wah! I wanted more Snape/Sirius in there! I think im addicted now!

~This message i the property of the Half-Blood Princess~

ook but i hsve to say one thing it kind of reminded me of final fantsy on the love lines at the end with dra and harry!! ^__^
(Harry sighed. “I can’t have you killing every one of your housemates. Think of who you were before all of this. You need to calm down.”

Draco’s expression fell, his eyes filled with horror as the fond memories returned and he sank to the floor. Harry followed him and wrapped him in his arms, covering them both with the blanket. “Sh,” he cooed, his hold tightening when Draco started shaking. “It’s alright.”

“So much… so much has changed. There… I… What….” Words finally failed him as Draco let his head fall to Harry’s chest, his mind whirling at just how much had changed when he gained his inheritance. His loyalties, his friends, his house, everything was going to be affected, and only now was this crashing down on his head.

“Harry, what do I do?” he groaned, gripping Harry’s robes to keep himself from falling over. “What do we do? The… the war…”

Harry caught onto Draco’s line of thought and carefully pulled his hands from his robes, grasping them between his own. He held his gaze level with Draco’s eyes, commanding his attention with a serious face. “We do the best we can,” he said softly, “and hope for the best.”) <- dont yah think? anyway going to miss yah!! well bye!!

I definitely LOVED the update. You write your characters with such passion, that I feel my stomach leaping and falling with their different emotions. Please updates soon, you have me DYING to know what happens next!

~Jess

well this is for the last chapter, people like this story and the way that you were writing it, so that is why peoples keep favoring and stuff. All you needed was to make the chapters longer and to keep on the way that you were going instead of letting someone else take over the story so they an make the story very different and then people wont like that very much, I can tell you that. plus all you needed on top of that was to get peoples to give you ideas for the next chapter, then build off of the ideas that they give you... So if you needed any help for another story that is like this one just come to me since I have a lot of ideas but I can't write worth shit! and I would like these ideas to become stories... and then I start babbling...

aw sadface, ok well i suppose i'll learn to like immortal sailor whoever

OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY!
okay.
XD