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| DivineSunSHiNE. 2008-02-01 ch 2,  | abuseGEHH! WHHAAT?! NO MORE CHAPTERS?!? Like seriously! I was all ready to go to the next chapter when I realized there wasn't one! GEH! WHAT HAS THE WORLD FALLEN TO?!?!?!? Alright. I'm done with caps lock I swear. Anywho. Update son! I lovelovelovelovelovelovelovelove this. :3 |
| Caoimhe 2008-01-13 ch 2, anon. | abuseOMG OMG OMG OMG! That was AMAZING! |
| Roses of Sharon 2007-12-26 ch 2, | abuseWell, I don't really know what to say. Your story seems fine. Good grammar, nice plotline, not bad. Your personality, on the other hand... I'm sorry, but I can't like someone who so openly complains about the level of writing they find on the site. Sweetling, I hate arrogance. I hate brashness even more. Shape up - GROW up. |
| teqila shots 2007-12-17 ch 2, | abuseLOVE IT=)! PLEASE CONTINUE IT:D |
| Death Fox 2007-10-21 ch 2, | abuseI like this very much. =3 |
| narutoalicefan 2007-10-13 ch 2, | abusethis is a great story please continue |
| Phantasm Whisperer 2007-08-26 ch 2, | abuseWah! Update! Update! |
| xxInuloverxx 2007-08-17 ch 2, | abuseWow I actually was good and I wonder what punishment Sasuke will recieve. |
| A.Annie.N 2007-06-09 ch 2, | abuseDON"T JUST LEAVE IT LIKE THAT! killing me here! PLEASE UPDATE! Annie |
| Inuzuka Nin 2007-04-17 ch 2, | abuseI enjoyed it! In fact, I loved it! You write extremely well, and your plot so far is great, too! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon! Inuzuka Nin~ |
| Mafis 2007-04-01 ch 2, | abuseWOW...that was a god chapter! Actually,I don't think it fits in that badly. I love it this way really! Your story already has me hooked on, and and..and...it was just awesome! I wonder what they will do to sasuke! Man, what a bastard in this chapter! But Sakura was stepping out of line by calling him traitor...o...update as soon as you possibly can o great writer of this story! |
| All The Good PenNames Are G... 2007-03-17 ch 2, | abuseI don't remember any mistakes. I love this fanfic so much pretty please update soon. The lack oocness in your characters is amazing. I am always worried about keeping them in character without betraying the whole premiss of my fic. I have found that adding alcohal helps to make them mold to what you want! Anyway, less about me more about you, this fanfic is so freakin good I am going crazy over here! update or I will attack you with a shovel! Oh and as an after thought all the good pen names ARE taken! |
| Mr. Despair 2007-02-14 ch 2, | abuseEvil bastard conflicted Sasuke. ** off respectable ninja Sakura. Yummy. |
| Real Twi-hard 2007-02-03 ch 2, | abuseI thought chapter 2 was really, good. I can't beleive Sasuke was gambling with Sakura, and then tried to choke her, but i guess he got really mad, when she said he was traitor, because she's like probably one of the closests people to him. anyway are you going to update anytime soon? please. |
| Noods 2007-02-01 ch 2, | abuseAGGH UPDATE FOR SASUSAKU's SAKE! Great :D |