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| Dr. Temperance Brennan 2007-08-15 ch 20,  | abuseI'm close to tears- happy tears of course! This is such a beautiful fic. I wish there was a sequel! |
| Dr. Temperance Brennan 2007-08-15 ch 17, | abuseI'm so glad that I discovered this fic this summer rather than last summer. Last summer I was 13, and that smut would have disgusted me, now, at 14, though it doesn't seem like so much of a difference, I see it as a beautifully written scene that was long awaited. |
| Dr. Temperance Brennan 2007-08-15 ch 15, | abuseWhile I still think this story is fantastic, I think that you should get a beta. There are some spelling and punctuation errors, that don't detract from the story that much, but that should be corrected. |
| Dr. Temperance Brennan 2007-08-15 ch 12, | abuseI've never seen anybody mix angst and fluff as perfectly as you do. This fic is incredible. It's exactly my taste. |
| Dr. Temperance Brennan 2007-08-15 ch 5, | abuse“Please don’t talk to me about anything Freud said, it makes me paranoid. I start looking at cigars and think they have hidden meanings.” “You know, for a non-relationship, this is awfully suggestive, don’t you think?” Fantastic dialogue- those are the kind of lines that I repeat out loud, just so I can laugh again! |
| odeepblue 2006-05-17 ch 20, | abusei absolutely loved this chapter, the ending was amazing! it truly amazes me that you actually fulfilled everything i wanted for the ending, but yet it was less than 5 pages long ;) you truly are great :) |
| jtbwriter 2006-05-16 ch 20, | abuseI'm glad you changed your mind one more time! This was romantic and hot and gave Gris the chance to show Sara how much he loves her. And-Sara finally got it through to him that he's hot to her! Thanks for a great story! |
| Gris's butterfly 2006-05-16 ch 20, anon. | abuseplease don't end it, there! more more more, give us more |
| csi1gil1 2006-05-15 ch 19, | abuseoh I know you so want to write more of this . got to .. Syrup now thats a whole chapter in itself . I love this story . |
| jtbwriter 2006-05-15 ch 19, | abusePancake syrup? Oh my God! LOL! The mental images alone-how am I supposed to work thinking of that! Yes you may give us more as long as it's GSHR (giggle)! Thank you for Gris's words of assurance and love-for his endearing shy love and for being there for Sara-what a man! Now what?:) |
| odeepblue 2006-05-14 ch 17, | abuseabsolutely amazing chapter ;) |
| jtbwriter 2006-05-14 ch 17, | abuseThat was so sweet-very, very hot, too! Thanks for the romantic way Gris made sure Sara knew she was wanted and loved! Thanks for a good update-I love that Gris remembered protection and the sexy way Sara took care of that! Now what?:) |
| odeepblue 2006-05-11 ch 16, | abusei ,loved the tush part, lol ;) |
| jtbwriter 2006-05-11 ch 16, | abuseThat was really good-I love the way Gris reassured and played with Sara all at once. His way with Mrs. Sidle was good too, now Sara knows he can handle both of them! Great read-thanks! Now what?:) |
| br4nd13 2006-05-11 ch 16, | abuseLove this story :) I love the spin you're putting on Sara's and Laura's relationship -- it's a POV I hadn't thought of before but I dig it. |