 Backroads 2006-09-14 . chapter 1I like a lot! What a great attitude! A very feminist princess. Very strong voice. |
 Sashaying down the Catwalk 2006-09-12 . chapter 1Poignant. |
 salrianna 2006-06-07 . chapter 1Perfect, completely Rika.
But Calrian was no knight
Shining armour or tin foil. |
 Allys Victory 2006-04-30 . chapter 1Huh, it was short, just when i was starting to get into it it stopped. But i liked it ^-^. |
 Captain Fantastic 2006-04-20 . chapter 1That was surprisingly pleasant. The sixth line might flow a little better if it said 'Doesn't mean that I was lost'. But that's just my opinion. Nice job all around. Kudos. |