 DramaQueen of the moon 2007-08-05 . chapter 1Cool! UPDATE ASAP! |
 karen houston 2007-04-19 . chapter 1 I realy liked it so far so can you please cointinue. |
 warprince2000 2006-04-22 . chapter 1Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter (update soon Plz) |
 Moey25 2006-04-21 . chapter 1You're still a great writer. Nice story. Update soon.
~Chloe |
 Bee Bop 2006-04-21 . chapter 1I think this is a wonderful story! Aw, I like it very much. I know what you mean by the whole not updating thing.. I'm pretty bad about that.. I just updated one fiction.. I hadn't updated it in like 6 months.. ^_^;;
I hope you can update this soon, when you have the time! =) |
 Haven Artemis Roth 2006-04-20 . chapter 1Terra just HAD to butt in, didn't she? |
 Thanatose 2006-04-20 . chapter 1It's pretty good and I hope it gets better as it goes along. |
 troubled-ego 2006-04-20 . chapter 1Haha! Welcome back to the Teen Titans realm!
Terra sure is indecisive. First she brushes BB off, now she's oggling over him again.
Obviously, Terra doesn't deserve him.
Pretty good first chapter. FMA is a great anime, like really good so I completely understand why you wanted to write fanfics on it! I'm currently trying to watch all of the Bleach episodes. Did you see the FMA movie Conqueror of Shambala? It was awesome!!
Yeah, I could give you ideas for your story but I already thought of this situation but it's opposite. Terra doesn't want to get back with BB. I made it that way cuz in SUMMER WOES! (which I'm still sadly working on)I wanted to make Raven fight Terra for BB's sake. It's gonna be a kewl chappy. It's kinda far away though.
I'll give you some ideas once I think of any. This review is already long so c ya. |
 RaeVin 2006-04-20 . chapter 1Hey Colie, Wow, I have been waiting for a really good story that’s a continuation of the series, and now I think I have found it. Now, I am going to tell you up front that I am a full-blown RobRae fan, but I don’t want this to affect your view of me as a reviewer. I try to be as unbiased as possible, and I think it will be interesting to read a RobStar and BBRae story for a change. I really appreciate all of the subtle hints at the feelings that each character exhibits toward another. The slight blushes and tiny smiles are perfect for the beginning hints at relationships. Hmm… Tara versus Terra is an interesting concept. And just to tell you, the quote is, “Things Change Beast Boy. This girl you want me to be is just a memory.” That is my favorite quote from the whole entire series. The second I heard it, it stuck in my memory, and now I can’t stop making references to it. I like how you incorporated it into your story, considering that it the main theme of where the series left off. And, I thought that you did a great job with Raven’s different sides conversing in her mind. A lot of authors make Raven go to Nevermore whenever she talks to them, but I like the idea her being able to hear them and speak with them at all times. As for your BBRae interaction, I really liked it. Shouting and fighting always serves well bring people closer together in the end. I am a big fan of angsty relationships, so the introduction of Terra into this love triangle will serve me well. I am truly excited to find out where you plan to take this story. Excellent job so far.
RaeVin |
 me 2006-04-20 . chapter 1 hey this looks great i can't wait for you to continue |
 Slade's Downfall 2006-04-20 . chapter 1 I'm much too lazy to log in, Carrot The Luv Machine. You wrote something new!! Yay!! It's good, good stuff, BB/Raeness. Yes, so nice to see you again. |