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| Trishkafibble 2008-07-03 ch 1,  | abuseHee! That was delightful!! Pure genius, to give Nawi a Rodneyesque manner, and to turn the fiasco into a success. Yay for Earthly politeness! Darn good thing it *wasn't* Sheppard's team...or at least, a certain one of them. ;P Great job, I grinned through the whole thing. Thanks a bunch! ^^ |
| Shep Code 2006-04-23 ch 1, | abuseThis was hysterical! The agony of the harvest festival and the toll it took on the poor Atlanteans was described brilliantly, and the ending was perfect. I loved all of Lorne's comments regarding Sheppard's team. Now he really does know what it feels like. :~) Thank you for sharing this fun story! |
| drufan 2006-04-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was delightful! The gods comment was incredibly funny. Snorted at that one. "Yeah, thanks folks..." Really loved this little tale! Glad you were forced to write it. |
| fififolle 2006-04-21 ch 1, | abuseI couldn't stay away! What a great story. Now that explains a lot about Lorne, those half-sisters. The man looks like he has the patience of a saint. Anthropology... you must have to be kind of special for that, eh? Poor old Tony, though, he'll learn. You conjured up some terrific images, and the humour was wonderful. Loved the fact they had five hours of briefings and didn't suss out the Crethins :D A brilliant morsel. More anytime! |
| Alasse Faelivrin 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abuseMuy bien! El pobre Lorne! Sorry, my Spanish, it is not the best ;) |
| Nelowl 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely brilliant - I laughed all the way through it. |
| LT 2006-04-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseBwahaahaha! Awesome. Nice to read, it flowed. And boy was that crazy. Stupid alarm. I see there's a reason the traders never go twice. |
| Someone Reading 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abuseHilarious! Poor Lorne, he doesn't make enough money for this. The characterization, dialog and the whole situation were just perfectly done. I think ga unicorn needs to keep after you about certain fics more often, cause this one was a total gem. Thanks for sharing. |