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Reviews For: Ray of Hope

Wolfen Dreams 2007-12-26 ch 1,	abuseYou know, I can never decide if I want to read one of your stories or not. Half the time they are anti-Phoebe, and half the time they aren't. However, you write wonderfully, and its usually worth the risk of reading an anti-Phoebe fic to read yours. (Phoebe was always the sister I identified best with, but I understand residual anger towards her behavior regarding Cole in the latter part of his time on the show) Anyway, This fic was definately one of the more enjoyable ones. I'm happy I got to read it!
Faerie Dreaming 2007-08-17 ch 1,	abuseWow! What an amazing and original story. I can't express to you how much I love it. I love Melinda and how she is with Cole. That's so adorable!! I can just see Julian with a little girl in his arms. A beautiful oneshot story. I would love it if you found a way to continue it!! I love love love this. P.S. - My sixth chapter is up, by the way, if you'd like to read/review it!!
Christine Ruud 2007-07-17 ch 1,	abuseAw...sad. It's really unique--I like it!
Joleca 2007-06-18 ch 1,	abuseAbsolutely beautiful... I do wish that Piper had let Cole know that Phoebe had forgiven him and wanted him back... Yes, it would have hurt him because he hadn't been there, but I think it would have also healed him...
Riker15 2007-05-05 ch 1,	abuseawesome
Edog 2006-09-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseGreat story! Except, why do you always kill off Phoebe?? I love Cole though He is so awesome! Good job on this one!
Reius Devirix 2006-08-17 ch 1,	abuseLoved your story! I hoped that there would be some more chapters, though... You're a great writer!
muddlingthrough 2006-05-12 ch 1,	abuseSequel! Sequel! It's lovely little story.
Caralynne 2006-04-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseAmazine. And I am even more amazed that English isn't your first language...your grammar is probably better than mine. :)
Nancy T. 2006-04-21 ch 1,	abuseThis is extraordinarily good -- sad, sweet, hopeful, and sadly probable. Everything in it rings true with the characters as we know them: Phoebe being fooled by a charming guy, Piper's guard against him being down because she thinks he'll help Phoebe forget Cole, Piper and Leo fleeing someplace unnamed to protect their children, Piper wanting a few minutes in the mausoleum alone, all of Cole's reactions. I love the thought of Melinda's being Phoebe reincarnated and liking Cole immediately, and Cole's mixed reaction to that. I love Melinda's stubornness (although I think Piper would have smiled when Cole talked about Halliwell stubbornness; she would know that it's true). I am staggered at your ability to write in another language. Couple of slight errors -- "death" is the noun, "dead" is the adjective, and you used "now" when you meant "know" -- but these are very minor. How did you master the verb tenses? "He had disappeared one day and Phoebe and she had been very relieved." Most native English speakers would mangle that sentence, and you delivered it perfectly. Impressive feat both technically and artistically!
Blue eyes6 2006-04-21 ch 1,	abuseGreat story. Seems like Cole feels a connection with Melinda. I don't blame Piper for being supicous, but at least she cut him a little slac k.
twotoe 2006-04-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseReally good little story. I love that Cole doesn't feel bad about Paige. Very true to character with those two. I imagine that this was probably a oneshot, but a sequel or followup chapters would be nice and I would love to read it. Perhaps after a bit, Cole would even attempt to find Paige in a way where he would never be suspected of having anything to do with her disappearing. I wouldn't want him to do it and be in trouble because of it. Cole as sort of Godfather to Melinda is pretty neat too. I do have one question though, I can see Piper having to be careful, especially when the children were young not being Charmed anymore and even now in perhaps wanting to protect her children from demon onslaught, but isn't Wyatt in particular pretty darned powerful? On the level pretty much with the Power of Three or more in many ways, even if he can't do power of three spells themselves? Is is still his? Not particularly important at the moment, especially if it is a 'trying to keep him out of it at his age' sort of thing, because Cole as a very powerful entity offering to help and protect Melinda and by extension the rest, is much more interesting for your story. Just a random detail that struck me in regard to Wyatt is all. Okay, I'm rambling now. Can you tell that I loved your story and can see all kinds of possibilities of an extension of it that I can love? LOL Hopefully we will see more.
Wicked R 2006-04-20 ch 1,	abuseaw. that was very nice. i hardly read any Charmed nowadays, there's nothing realy new, but this touched me from the beginning. I dunno, I find Melinda's behaviour a bit unlikely as I have kids myself, but otherwise a great story

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