wow, i really just love your story. everything about it is (in my eyes) really a perfect story. the plot is going at an exolent speed love it. the characters are well developed. the background is not too much, and is not over baring. and the plot (serious (cant spl) is getting his memory back) is also very well written. you my friend are one of the best writers i have had the pleasure of reading their stories and i have been on Fanfiction for almost 2 years. so thank you for your awsome contribution to this site.

Signed
-The Puppet Master

just wanted to say i thought your story was excellant and i just wanted to also say i think sirius and remus make the best couple!
well done,
samanatha x x x x

I like your story, and whoever said your sex scene was too detailed, knew what he was getting himself into.

I liked the idea of Sirius remembering because he found the photos. But I'm wondering, at the beginning how did Remus know that Sirius didn't remember anything about the two of them?

The sex scene was good, but be careful. It was too explicit for If someone complains, your story could get deleted from the site. You might want to post a tamer version here and post the original version at somewhere like

Congratulations on getting published!

I'm thoroughly enjoying this so far, and off to read the rest, but before I forget:

Grim- only one "m"
boogers- is an American slang term; Sirius would probbly have said "bogies"

I think this fic was brilliant. The story was short, but the detail was still there and I really really enjoyed reading it. It was tragic how Sirius didn't even know himself to start with but then he remembered his life, and that Rem was his life.
I am now officially saying that "you rock!" this fic was great and I loved it. Congratulations on a fabulous story. *is now happy*

This was a great little story!
It's incredibly warm.
Although I did feel sad when Remus was praying.
Delighted you wrote it.

I loved it. Poor Remus having to make his mate remember everything.