Omg! Please! I have to know what happens next! I adore this story! Please, post another installment!

Please finish the story it wad getting good

nmice chapter. good build up to some action! i'm sure ms. petrie is going to be sooo excited to see them.

well, at least he didn't make her an offer she couldn't refuse! what a pickle to be in, mob on one side ronnie on the other, at least the mobs not after them! nice chapter, cant wait to read the next one!

glad to see an up-date on this fic. i put off starting it for fear it wouldn't get finished! very nice start am eager to get to the next chap.

Absolutely love your stories. Here's hoping that you come back and give us another update, please!

I love this and I'm so happy you updated! I can only hope that you will continue with this story because it is awesome!

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I realise that it's been years since you posted anything here, but I thought I'd let you know that I've really enjoyed reading your DEBS stories. Your portrayal of Lucy is brilliant. I would really like it if you posted an update, but realise that it has really been years, so such a thing is unlikely.

But thanks for the fun read anyway!

*Snickers* Lucy is so incredibly bright. It amazes me that you are able to plot all this out like you were Lucy. Kudos.

Great story, have read both of them, and neither dissapoints.

Noticed you haven't updated in a while, so please PMS

I just read both of you stories and i think they a brilliant. Just enough tension and you caught the characters well.

I hope you keep writing i cant wait to se what happens.

Hehe!

I've just found this having read your other DEBS fic a little while back. I am SO pleased you've decided to follow this up! the original was great, this is setting up to be brilliant! :D

Can't wait to read more :)

Jotter

what will happen

i hope you post more soon because this fic is getting good. don't leave us hanging!

hope everything goes well. keep it up it's really good. post soon plz