Interesting...

This has promise.

THre are a few spots where u missplaced letters in some words.

An easy mistake to fix.

Please update soon!

Hi there!

Not much yet, but it sure has potential. I see the beginning of a greate fanfic. Please continue soon.

Greetings from Norway

Paladin Steelbreaker

Cliffhangers, cliffhangers. Clifhangers. Well, this sounds like a good mystery. Written well, keep writing!

hey where's the rest? I'd like to see Hermi rescue Harry, and kick some Cho butt!

I am likeing it a lot please write more

good. deep. wow

PLEASE FINISH! I LOVE THIS FIC

Why on earth did Herm agree to go one on one with no magic. She could have kicked that b*tch's @$$ with magic. Never give your enemy the advantage. This story is going to be very good.

I luv it! Keep on going! H/H forever!

please write more! pretty please! h/h rules!

This is really good! _

There are multiple spelling mistakes, but not enough to make it bad.

You just need a beta-reader.

Chopstick knives? That reminds me of something I saw on Ranma 1/2... is that where you got it?

Anyway, this is great, keep going.

Fantastic! This is already sounding great! I can't wait for more!

Very intriguing, one question if Cho's chopsticks were actually knives, why wouldn't they cut her head, if chopstick are put in properly they are pressed up very close to the person's head. That's it very interesting story.

? What's happening?

H/H rules!