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Reviews For: Private Bet #11: A Twist and a Knot in the Tale - Reviews: Page 1 of 2

funkmasterjo
2006-11-27
ch 1,
abuse...extreme crossover. It's extreme
dogbertcarroll
2006-10-11
ch 1,
abuseLOL!
Gundum M
2006-04-15
ch 1,
abuseyep. funny too. hope to see more.
The Winged Cosplayer
2005-12-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseyes, insanity does help a lot.
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Pardon me, for if I hold the laughter in any more, I'll turn into a spork.
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AH HAHAHA HA HAHAHAHA HAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! OH MY GOD! HAHA HA HAHAHAHA AHAHA! THAT WAS SO INSANE! THANK YOU! HAHAHAHA!
warai kitsune
2005-07-28
ch 1,
abuse...good lord, you don't pull your punches, do you? My only complaint with this story is the same with all of your others. YOU DON'T FINISH THEM! You have a gift for creating plot lines that promise both laughter and introspection, and then you LEAVE THEM HANGING.

P.S. Ever seen Dual? Mitsuki Rara seems like she'd blend in perfectly with the other 'nice ones.' Though the spring would then be Tenkoizuto (Tenchi, Makoto, Keiichi, Kazuki, Akito.)
Psycho Pirate the Nth
2003-06-20
ch 1,
abuseNow look at that...
You went and made God uncomfortable.U_U
My hat's off to you!
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Wait! I don't have a hat!^_^'

Ever thought o' becoming a darkscribe?
I'm sure they'd accept you with open arms.
(And I can just imagine this... LD's Bet.)
Lord Shade...sounds Sw337 don't it?
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(Be sure to continue this after your done with Bet#10)PLEASE!?
Hiryu
2002-07-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseYou better continue this!
John Dunkelburg
2001-09-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseGAAAHH!!! WHAT were you ON when you wrote this!?! I LIKE IT!!!
Heff
2001-06-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseJinnai Kuno????? Naga Kuno??? Ayeka Kuno?? *gets a cardiac arrest n slumps to the floor in agonizing pain*
CSMars
2001-05-25
ch 1,
abuseHysterical!!! Ha ha ha, I love it!!!
Commander Galos
2001-05-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh dear... you call yourself crazy? To put it mildly, insane hardly begin to describe this idea!!! MAN I LOVE IT!!! Unfortunately, I've seen this as a one-shot in another archive with your fics on it... i don't hold too much hope of seeing this continued, but as people say, hope springs eternal, right? PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE CONTINUE IT!!!!!
Depraved Sociopath
2001-05-21
ch 1,
abuseIt burns like fire. But I like fire...if only there were actually a chance that this would be continued! ^_^
Unonomis
2001-05-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseOH GOD! I see what you ment by getting a drink. anyways good story, i would like you to continue it
Gary Wong
2001-05-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseinteresting story ^_^... i would love to see what happens. Continue. This is one major cross-over, but it can be good if you pull it off right. U could have Naru Nagasagawa too for the violent fiancees, but she is pretty cute.
Dane
2001-05-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis has definite possibilities. Will there be more coming?
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