I'm jealous of your not seeing it. I've been FORCED to sit through that movie TWICE. I despise it.

Gexegee...

I, for one, am wholeheartedly glad I am not a Nobody. For, to be as such, and to read this fanfiction, would be a true, rue tragedy.


Your literary portrayal of Xaldin, Vexen, and Lexaeus was entirely superb, and the environments you so unceremoniously thrust them into only served to make that even more apparent.

You successfully managed to lampshade all of the common flaws in fanfiction, and, by showing the way to do it right, have served, not only to entertain, but to teach.

Of course, the story is the central root of things, and, I can honestly say that I found the climax and resolution of this particular fanwork to be as satisfying as the story it drew from. In fact, the epilouge awoke a feeling in me I haven' experienced since the first time I beat "Ocarina of Time". My only regret is that I do not have the skills necessary to create a fangame based upon this story.

I have to say, though, you used on of my favorite ending devices: The heroes and their surviving companions recover from their ordeal, and return to their lives with some semblance of normalcy, all the while acknowledging that they have been forever changed by their journey.

It was a pleasure to read your work, and, for what my meager approval is worth, I will be subscribing to "Organization VI".

I hope to see more brilliant work from you all.

... You know, I thought you were pretty awesome before, but when I saw this:"...And that is the sound of the Ultimate Suffering.”"

Well, you are just the bee's knees, man. And gangsta Luxory is my favorite thing so far.

I think I love you for that scene with Seifer.

Firefly, for the win!

...

I went and listened to "The Lazytown Cake Song".


And, I searched "Paris Hilton New Single", and got "My BFF".


Listened to that, too...


I'm fine.

That was funny. Grand Master Fangirl... there probably is one out there.

*chuckle* That was brilliant. Truly brilliant. And the best satire I've seen of out of the Kingdom Hearts section of fanfiction.

If I had the time or the inclination to use up all 10 characters I would tell you which scenes were my favorite and made me laugh so loud my sister thought I had finally lost it.

As it is, I'm too lazy. But the OC world was definitely my favorite, I think. Especially the wait line for getting keyblades. But then again Axel and Larxene's experiences back at the World that Never Was were extremely entertaining too...

Oh hell, I loved the whole thing. There, I admitted it.

Awesome job again, I truly admire your satirical skill in this story.

~KC

Grand Master Fangirl?
Dear lord, this story is EPIC.

This is easily the best Kingdom Hearts story I've ever read...I love how it pokes fun of the various members of Organization XI being out of character in fanfiction,Mary Sues,yaoi,non-Disney/Final Fantasy crossovers and other over-used and cliched ideas for stories...

I'd like to start this out by saying that I made this FF account mostly so I could show you my gratitude for sharing this story with the Kingdom Hearts community.

Now that that's out of the way, I can't tell you how many times I laughed during this story. No, I really can't, I lost count at around 50. Few of them feel contrived or overdone, and it's so quotable that my friend and I will yell "SURRENDER THE PANTS" to each other to get their attention.

Also, your story made a rainy day into a Moulin Rouge viewing, banana bread eating extravaganza. Just saying.

This is one of the best fanfictions I've ever read, full of wit, charm, and just a hint of malevolence (except for Vexen; he got hit with the malevolence hammer multiple times). I can't think of much else to say other than to please keep up the amazing work.

-- Moonea

...:D

Seriously, no matter how many times I read this, it remains tremendously funny and hilarious, one of the best satire fics out there. And hey, it has a good story to it as well!

It's great to see Vexen and Lexaeus in the limelight, as they are two of my favorites. (Xaldin less so, but that's mainly due to the liberal use of Mickey I had to make use of in my fights with him...)

A fine way of ending the story, and just imagining what Axel and Larxene are putting the others through is just hilarious. (For some reason I see them both dressed up like Bob Sagat and playing the America's Funniest Home Videos theme before starting the film. Delightful.)

Heh. You've probably been asked this a lot, but what would Vexen, Lexaeus, Roxas's, and Xaldin's Semes been like, had they been infected?

For Lexaeus I think he'd probably be the dumb jock musclehead that some people seem to think he is...

Xaldin being called Rastafarian earlier made me think his Seme would be faux-Jamaican like Homie X Luxory was faux-pimp.

And honestly? I think if Vexen ever went Seme he'd be more like Doctor Frank-N-Furter from Rocky Horror Picture Show rather than disturbing Texas hick.

But that's just me. *shrugs*

Still, great story. I'm glad I found it, and I'm very glad you wrote it. Thank you for providing us all with a laugh.

YAY for Larxene!

heheh, i'm finding this fic very funny, but this chapter had been the best, so that's why I felt I needed to comment on it. the thought of Larxene brutally murdering thousands of annoying mary sues just gives me this really warm fuzzy feeling inside.

I owe you one...actually, let me make that, umm... five for sure, but I'm going to go out on a limb and assume that I owe you thirteen. A way to find out what NOT to do without reading through all the archives of disaster! Hurrah!

Again, nice wording: "...Mansex announced, jutting out his hips in a traumatic fashion."

Ahahaha, "Xaldin, Vexen and Lexaeus did not respond to that, staring at him (or in his general direction, in Vexen’s case) with dropped jaws."

Ah, I like this description of the Grand Master Fangirl. Sounds pretty accurate. ^_^

Lol, “But females are ICKY!” “And would probably be filed under ‘humans’, if you were to be specific.”
And, “To make a long story short!” “Twelve chapters too late.”

And of COURSE she would use Cliff's Notes, even for her evil villainous final boss speech. (shakes head)

"...and as the two of them guffawed together, our heroes took the opportunity to huddle together." Protagonists should do that more often, in my opinion. Just like bad guys ought to take the opportunity to attack magical girls while they're busy with their lengthy transformation and/or attack sequences.

Yu Yevon wrote an intro for the final boss handbook; awesome.

“In writing—particularly in writing fan work, half of the challenge is fitting into the universe which you’ve been given.” I know, seriously. It bugs me so much when I point out that someone's writing the characters OOC, and they respond with, "I know, it's just easier to write them that way." -_- That's what makes AUs so fun, is trying to keep the characters true to themselves when you're writing them into a totally different setup from their canon.
Heh, I like how there's touching piano music playing as they discuss this.

“Because it’s EXTREMELY detrimental to the success of our mission!” Yeah, have a heart!

"You could almost say they didn’t have the—" “But we WON'T.” XD

Lol, so the Nobodies play FF games? Cool.

Aw, man, sounds like a cool fanfic idea (FF version of TLS). I'd like to write it if I get any ideas and had time for yet more projects. Is there any chance you'll write it yourself?

Do we get to see Roxas's Seme?! In any case, it's nice to see a (brief, thankfully) comeback for the Semes - and all together, too. (Must have fanart...) Heh, I think Zexy-poo's my favorite Seme. He's so incredibly over-the-top, it's hilarious.

I finally saw Demyx when I was playing the game! He's adorable! And his Seme seems fitting. ^_^
"'WHAPOOW!' Demykins made a flying leap at Lexaeus and completely missed. His valiant attack was utterly ignored." Aw Demykins, ILU. ^_^
“Isn’t that another Savage Garden song?” ILU too, Zexy-poo. Don't worry! Just practice a lot, and someday...maybe...you'll be able to come up with you own lyrics!

Hm, I wonder what Xaldy would have been like. Or the other two.

“Actually, it seems in this incarnation I’ve come equipped with an upgraded speech capacity and the ability to express myself in a somewhat more sophisticated manner.” Whoa!
“HOKAY!” All right, that's the Luxory I know. That was funny!

Aw, leave Murray alone, Fangirl! He's single-handedly providing the epic final battle soundtrack!

"He’s just a little stupid dude." Which is why I wuv him. ^_^
“'LEAVE DEMYKINS ALONE! LEAVE HIM ALONE!' Zexy-poo sobbed wildly, smearing his mascara." And this is why I wuv Zexy-poo.

"...connected by one very important thing…” “Th-their hearts?” "Uh… no. Modems.” Nice!

Ah. The Grand Master Fangirl is defeated once and for all by - her oblivious mom. Priceless. :)

“What am I, eight?” "NO. YOU’RE TWELVE." Hahaha...figures.

“It’s boring here anyways. . . .I mean, there’s no crayons." Man, I am going to be so disappointed when I see more of Demyx in the game and he doesn't act like Demykins. ^^;

"...they’d finally caught ‘em all. And yet, also feeling rather irritated at something." What, that he's a Youknówmon Master now? :p

No! Xaldin! (And Roxas!) D:

"Eventually vague notes came together in a strange astral melody that tinkled and echoed across time and space themselves." It's a flume! j/k

"It seemed that the choir from chapter five had finally found some new work now that Jeffiroth was gone." Yay!

So Xaldin and Roxas are alive after all?! So glad! Though I guess that should have been obvious. ^^;

What is your personal screen name?