hahah! Unusual yet funny! It's great

-claps like a happy-go-lucky baby- That was hilarious!! -bangs head on desk- HAHAHAHA!! I thought this chapter deserves FIVE stars in comedey!! ^_^

Interesting!! The way you made it really modern was cool, and Riku's personality has a funny twist to it. Keep it up! I can't wait to see more chapters!

poor Riku... -ahem- Great Chapter!! Make them more in character though (how many times do I gots to tell you that?! ;p)