Wow! I wanna read more about Seifer and Quistis's past! Fantastic work!

Nicely done. It's hard to find satisfactory interaction between Quistis and Seifer. Most of that "Seiftis" stuff gives me a headache. But this is kept well in character and isn't too mushy.

Dude, nice job.

Love it!

Beautifully done, simply wonderful! I have taken up my spear to hunt for a good Quistis story and thank goodness I stumbled across yours! And finally, someone who understands the deeper aspects of Quistis' personality (as well as Seifer's!). It's because of people like you that I write myself...(there IS an intellectual equal out there!) Although, personally I tend to avoid Quistis and Seifer stories because the pair of them are much too headstrong for each other as a match; this story, however, appeals to that simmering conflict that stands between them. M, juicy.

Really, the entire thing was exquisite, but the bit I liked best about it was the dialogue between them at present and then the one they argued in the past right beside it. Genius!

Wow, I am just so impressed, I'm going to slip into incoherent babbling: wowzathatawuzagudwun, mustfavrighdaway!

Blackfire18

Another great one here! I loved the interaction between Quistis and Seifer, it was flawless. I liked the introspective of their history together as well. Great work.

Great one shot fic. Things are always so bitter between Seifer and Quistis eh? You write beautifully. I love your writing style and I hope to read more of your fics in the future!

Great what-if, and extremely true to character. I love Seifer and Quistis' interaction in this, how this one scene encapsulates so much of what lie between them-her successes, his failures, his defiance, Squall. "Softness, sadness, and steel" is just the perfect embodiment of how Quistis would regard Seifer. Thumbs up!

Perfect, just perfect. I don't think I've ever seen one like this before and it was just so beautifully written. I really enjoyed reading it.

Three words: I loved it.

It's nice to see a story on here that's more original. I liked the way it was set before the game. The way you write is beautiful, and it all flowed really well.

Truely amazing.

Lionheart1