Your characterizations are impressive -- and accurate. Well, perhaps a tad less chatty on Amon's part, but he has a history of opening up more when his brother is around. So very well done!

That was one interesting little tidbit. Damn, you've made me want to watch WHR, now. Good fic, great writing.

I love this! Your portrayal of Amon and Nagira's relationship strikes me as very realistic and in character.

Wow, this is way more thoughtful than a lot of the stuff that's out there. I wrote a giant piece of WHR fic (which you were kind enough to review) but reading pieces like this one makes me really want to do vignettes. :) A well-done one-shot can sometimes be better than a long, drawn-out story. Good for you!

Nice one shot!

This was excellent! One of the finest WHR pieces I've seen around in a long time, a definite breath of fresh air. I love the inclusion of Nagira, and you've captured the characters' personalities nicely.

If you're looking for somewhere else to post this, I highly recommend heading over to a website much like ff.et only exclusively for WHR fiction.

I hope you'll continute contributing to the fandom!