This is a beautiful well written story, I've stopped coming to read here, but u've sparked my intrest again, I hope u keep it up, ill be waiting for the next awesome chapter..can't wait

I should have done this earlier but whatever

elfin lied(1 0f my fav anime)+ FF7+ Clorith= AWESOME!

Wow was that action packed or what :D

I don't know but for some reason it seemed different to me than your other writing... Maybe its just me.

Keep up the awesome work!

oohh...i thought she was going to use her power again to get rid of Loz but when the tracks came...i knew what was gonna happen xD i'm glad to finally see Aerith do something lol (cause she was pretty much helpless for awhile ^^;)

lol Cloud changing. service for Aerith xD hahaha. and i also thought...maybe he should have went in the shower to warm up abit lol. or warm water bags...those might have helped. this chapter had action packed goodness =D

Aw it's one of the cuter chapters i've read,awesome like always Steph ^_^
Keep it up 8D i'm curious about the next one! :D

Once again, a fantastic job! I hope you update soon!

Poor Aerith! This chapter reminds me a lot of the anime Elfen Lied...
Anyway, good chapter! *goes off to read next chapter*

OMG i must know what happens next. i love the story, please keep writing more!!

For some "odd" reason this reminds me of Elfen Lied. You also have a few grammar problems, but whatever. I'm forgetting something... Oh yes, my opinion. It's not bad, not good either but not bad.

WOW, I was on the edge of my seat the whole time! It was amazing, awesome chapter, hope to see more soon

Wow, that was an awesome chapter! I love all of the Clorith fluffy-ness!

Wow...never knew Aerith had it in her! You know...the opening reminds me a bit of Elfen Lied.

But, I'm sure Aerith won't turn evil! Will she...? Anyway, good writing as usual! ^_^

Wow that was so cool! You're really good at writing battle scenes. I cant wait to read the next chapter!

the water must be cold..poor Cloud, now his hair is ruined xD

OH MY GOD! AH PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I gotta know wht happens, lol that was freakin awesome