Um . . .I totoally forgot what happened in the rest of the story . . .I vaguly remember Daniel loseing his memeiries, but why didn't Shara reconize him? And then he killed her and then she was alive. Was that a dream? (SOB!) I don't remember!

shreek!
i like it!
i liked your love never dies, returning home, secret job, the child and demon child too by the way!

. . . naked huh? That mean he's alive? Sigh, Amanda, Amanda, Amanda . . .your nuts . . .naked!?

This is good, but I think you should have more dilouge. Instead of Daniel and Oma were talking put what they say too. Same thing with Shara and Jack.

Keep up the good work! This made me laugh a little!
Good Job! Looking forward to more!

I like the chapter name, "Seeing Baal" HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA What a funny name! I keep wanting to say Bal. It's quite humurous. Ba... L.

Very good! I wonder what Oma, Daniel and Shara will talk about!
I bet Dr. Brightman will try to bring her back!
Good Job with this chapter!

Please continue! Shara reminds me a little of Jack too!
Good Job! Again I am very humbled that you wanted to use my idea!
Looking forward to more!

Just a question, What DOES Sg1 stand for?

The chapter seems rushed to me and lacking some detail . . .interesting though.
What's up with Ronan? Was he a good guy . . .I forgot. BAD JACKIE BAD!

They worked out well! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Good Job!
I am humbled that you gave me credit for the last two chapters! I was not expecting that!

. . .ah I eat too much chocolate. It's funny how readong you story want me to eat chocolate. I don't even like chocolate that much!

So right now Daniel lost his mermeies and is not dead anymore?

I have two: Lost City the end of season seven and Zero Hour (3 or 4th episode) of season 8.
You did great with this! Keep it up!

wait . . .I thought Skaara was dead ? ?