SWEET!

Wonderful story! It was very imaginative and suspenseful. I've enjoyed the read from beginning to end and really liked your characterizations.

Thank you for writing this piece.

Lol! Parts of that had me laughing very hard. XD Their banter was priceless.

Really really cute, although I think you should have writen more of them actually returning home and thereafter. Still and really enjoyable fic, good job :) !

--Miyth

I liked that. Thanks.

That was great, you really captured the two of them well. The last part was really funny.

This was fun! I love Carson and Rodney getting into trouble together. Write more please!

Hmm I don't think Carson would approve of jumping into an alien river with open wounds. Earth rivers are full of bacteria and animal faeces, you certainly wouldn't go diving into them! Otherwise a nicely written fic.

This was fun. Perhaps Carson should think it better for him to shoot then for a left handed Rodney too. Nice banter. :)

Hehehe great story - lots of laughs.

I loved this - I could see it being an episode. Added to my favourites. Great story.