This story was great =D
At first, I thought Xiayou was Julia cos i always assoiciate Julia with being a hippy xD
It remnded me of those 1960's films, i expected The Betles to come in sing, "Sheloves yu yeah yeah yeah!"
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Damn, dude. You totaly caught me off guard with the whole "cop thing". I actually thought Xiaoyu was a hipie but sh'es a cop! Man, i like the twist. I'm starting to like this. Iwon't be fooled anymore well, that is, if you continue this for me to predict the next thing that happens. good luck. Impressive storyline too. No devil gene and all that shit. Plus your range of music history is amazing.

yours truly,
Ghissy_rockstar

Hey this is good, I like it alot. Sixties nice choice, bud. I remeber now you saying something about a fic like this when you replyed my story. Well I finally found it. It is really creative and well writen and I love the twist there with Xiaoyu at the end. Slang is nice too. Now I'VE got a fic to look forward to. Can't wait for chapter 5. This is really good.

Oh is Lei Xiaoyu's dad or her partner or something??

Kap.

xiao a cop? i definitely didnt see that coming :)
i liked the way worded the last few paragraphs - "froze at the cool kiss of a gun." very nice :)
update x

yay you updated please update also on your HwoarangxMiharu fic.

Although i can't actually imagine jin & xiaoyu running around as hippies, i think this a very original idea.

im a big fan of 60s/70s music, myself. I'm glad someone finally wrote a fic that doesnt involve sappy pop songs.

update soon x

jun was a druggie? holy shit, I love this story more and more!

poor jin :( (I seem to find myself saying that often lately...) keep it up man!!

It's so weird imagining Jun dying of an OD. But I guess its new.
Sweet work!
&& nice update!

Very sixties I like it though update.

I've been seeing alot of original ideas lately--this being one of them.
Xiaoyu being a hippie, hm?

I'm definitely liking this Fanfic though.

Hello

First of, I just want to praise you for your ingenuity. It was new and fresh which is good. I have noticed your characters were OC. You made Xiaoyu into a hippie which is odd... A flower child(chuckles). Well, aside from a fresh storyline, you also impressed me with your grammar. Their dialogue was entertaining.

I know there aren't that much reviews as you expected but hopefully that wouldn't hinder you from writing your story. You'd make a great writer, you just need a little more impact on the chapters.

Please pursue your story. I just love Xiaoyins and it would be saddening if you stop now. By the way, what does OD mean?

Please update as soon as you can.

Much Love

LaineLush

heheh, I'm sorry you're disappointed about your reviews, but as long as you keep updating with good chapters, know that I will review (: I like how you're keeping her somewhat in character (pandas!) keep it up.

Wow, very cool. Will this be a Xiaoyu/Hwoarang? I think those two make the cutest couple in the Tekken world. I don't much like Xiaoyins. But don't let me sway you! Just keep going to way you originally planned :) Very nice. Update quickly!

dude I love it! something about this story is really intriguing and "catchy"... love the concept... and/or maybe it's because I like partying too, but really xD... great stuff, definitely update this soon, I'll be reading! (: