Lovely. It's easy to see this one as a snapshot in time. It had excellent flow and was very easy to read, as well as being an interesting piece. Good work.

I want more lol

a young girl sits as she reads the short one-shot, she gins at the ending.

"that was the cutest thing ever! i will never for get it!" she says this with a warbally voice as tears of stunning perfection slide down her smoothe but pale cheeks.

you know i love it...so cute! and up there is my writing style it happened exactly like that too..'

kaori

cute

i love it

I really liked this piece, especially the idea of someone who knows Kurama's situation still calling him Suuichi. Very unique.

That does make a point about the whole Suiichi/Kurama thing. It's kinda like the whole Kagome/Kikyo thing. I see where she's coming from there.

It was a little "inconclusive" I guess, but an excellent one-shot. A painting of words of one little moment in time.

Pretty

she really cries out for someone else who has figured out who they are in the face of past and present you know?

heheheheheheh interesting but i recall kikyou asking her that

Aw!It was so...So fluffy!It was incredibly sweet and made me want huge its nice to just read a piece fanfiction fluff,y'know?Good job!-

awe that was cute. i liked it. keep up the good work

That does make a point about the whole Suiichi/Kurama thing. It's kinda like the whole Kagome/Kikyo thing. I see where she's coming from there. Keep up the good work, dark

That was good, and I enjoyed it. Awesome work, even if there was no point. ;P

SW

I say you're pretty good at writing shorts, though I know I'm not. I've only written one and haven't even gotten it up onto the site yet! XD Great job!