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Miesie-chan
2009-10-13 . chapter 1
OMGG SO CUTE <3
KazeCat
2009-04-25 . chapter 1
ADORABLE!! That's pretty much everything I can say about this. Love the way you described them as kids, loved the teasing on both sides... Just love it
Moshi Moshi Mai
2009-01-13 . chapter 1
This was so cute! I dunno why, but I started crying when Gippal started saying, "No you won't." Nostalgia. :P Great job!

=Moshi Moshi Mai=
XattilaX-theMONKEY
2008-06-09 . chapter 1
haha three eyed guys ain't got nothing on Gippal!
that was really cute. i really like this style, it focuses more on what they're saying rather than what their doing.
i loved it.
sammierat
2008-03-22 . chapter 1
hahaha, i love it!
randomness mann... :D
but its a good topic to discuss!
Cheerio-panda45
2007-08-29 . chapter 1
Lol, that was cute!
ENTRIKIT
2007-08-15 . chapter 1
That was cute. xDD And I actually thought it was a nice way to write, because then the reader has more control over how they picture the scenes. Not to say that having action isn't bad, but just having dialogue is something I've only seen once or twice before.
I like how they admit things to each other and think they'll be all grown up at 13. xDD It's really cute. Very nice oneshot, as always.
deity of death1
2007-07-13 . chapter 1
LOL. Getting married at thirteen? X] I think it's cute.
Utsukushii-na-Hana
2007-06-10 . chapter 1
aw so CUTE! i could see little Rikuk and Gippals having a conversation like this. I loved the thing with how she'll still like him even if someone has three eyes. anyways... I LUBED IT
NoeyNewAccount
2007-06-10 . chapter 1
“You don’t have to be such a meanie. I thought gay men are happy.”

HAHAHAHAHAH! LOLZ!


HAHA! This fic is so awesome, there wasnt one flaw in it! It was also very funny! :) I couldnt stop laughing the entire time! I love ur oneshots!
manyissues101
2007-04-28 . chapter 1
That was really cute! I love the thing about Gippal being bendy!
Sugar911
2006-12-05 . chapter 1
OMG SO CUTE!^_^

GOOD JOB!

SUGAR911
weixuan18
2006-10-16 . chapter 1
Omg! Ur oneshots ARE THE BEST!!
Kaikai PANTS
2006-10-05 . chapter 1
cute
MissMeowsa
2006-09-21 . chapter 1
hahaha
i really enjoyed that dialogue. It really felt like it was coming from them :) good job
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