oh...wow. that was truly amazing... i love how you captured the moment, second by second, thought by htought. i love the imagery it evokes. (wait, is that a word?) ur truly amazing at writing fairy tales into life, the characters feel so real, everything. i adore your style! thank you!! happy writings, i hope you improve everyday! ^_^

Oh, I love it! I like how everything is phrased, and I think you've done a really good job of writing this. It's so beautiful...Beauty and the Beast is one of my favorite fairy tales as well. Please continue writing!
-Sallie82

Woah...you're right. Beauty and the Beast IS the best fairy tale ever.

I love your stories...and I know from your reviews that you love Mckinnley too...have you heard of Furcadia? I know its a weird question...but...

Keep writing =^..^=

ahh.. bless their coton socks! lovely KA, keep up the good fairy tales. well done. sos

Very beautiful and intence. Somehow you've captured the essence of the whole tale in a few words.

There are some things that can't be expressed in words, some subtle feelings you can't describe in plain, shivering prose. But for this little glimpse you got, I may say, Kathryn Angelle, that you embodied it in prose SO WELL that the image was conveyed as easily as one right before my eyes! Isn't that just the kind of romance we all want in our lives? And how pretty the picture you get from this! You will publish some great novel one day, I am sure. When you do - somewhere in the book, write that your online pen name was Kathryn Angelle - so I will know who wrote it! :):):) Seriously. You are such an extremely talented and wonderful writer! Absolutely beautiful! Splendiferous! Perfect! From that I suppose you get the picture. Now, for a few other comments: One - I LOVE long rambling reviews, so don't feel like you have to shorten them :):):):):) Two - Of course you can do a fanfiction of my fanfiction :) **grins** that is sooooo flattering! Thank you thank you! It makes me feel almost like a real live author :):):):) and Three - My friend Melanie goes under the penname of ArwenStar942 (I'm not completely sure of the last two numbers at the moment...), and she's reading and reviewing all my stories and poems systematically :) So now I can say that I've acknowledged my work to someone. Yay! Anyway I've got to go to youth group now, so Once again, wonderful little story this was, and thanks for reviewing mine! --ArwenAria18

i love this! inspired work is never rough; don't worry about it. if you change it, the moment will be ruined. Thanks for writing!

I really, really like this one. I'm not entirely sure why. Something about is really interesting though...

You've got an awesome gift with fairy tales...you make them a million times more beautiful. Thank you--I've always hated them, but your versions are so lovely... :)
--Portia

Thank you :)