Well now I know why there are hardly any kangeroos... lol.

People say that you are one of the greatest DBZ fanfiction writers they've ever read. *looks around for a moment* Uh...where can I sign up for that club? The first two stories were hilarious (if only for the "I MEANT to do that" factor) and the third...well, if I could write half as well as you can...well, it would mean that I would be able to write much more skillfully than I can now. Impressive work (even though you did it some time ago). I haven't the time tonight, but I've no doubt that I shall be looking into your other works in the future.

It is my duty as an author to give a serious and critical review. So here goes-

HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA... whe...

It's good to see that there are still people who take fanfiction seriously enough to make this much fun of it. It's also disappointing to see that there are things MUCH worse than this, and that the authors AREN'T doing it on purpose... or at least as far as I can tell.(KOFFKOFF!CUTIE PIXY!KOFF!) Incidentally, I don't even like DBZ, and the only reason I got here at all is because I was profile jumping... but that's not important. This was funny as hell. And I agree with you, by the way, on the issue of the arbitrary deletion of script fics.

Oh, and "Goals" was cool too.

-Overseer

Man. What elsse can be said?

Ha! The great Ash isn't perfect, after all! You are bad at something!

Even if it is just writing crappily.

-Almaseti

This is the worst story ever. (That's hat you wanted to hear right?) LOL!

I unno if I've read this before or not, but LMAO!

Goals.. mwa ha, awesome...

dude, ya shoulda ocntinued it... I couldn't stop laughing at the stupidity of it... bwa hahaha...

Um... hi. I recently read the beginning of a story that mentioned your penname, so I decided to take a look at one of your stories. It must have felt really, really strange to try and write badly on purpose. I'm not saying I write perfectly, but it just IRKS me out of my mind when I mess up on something in my writing. I don't know about you, but that's how it is with me.
But to your final story called Goals; it was really neat. Seeing as Krillin and Goku were on equal footing, the winner could have gone either way. And it's great that they kept their friendship in the story, too. They always were a bit more like friendly rivals later on, instead of jealous ones. At least, that's how I viewed it.
I'm sure you're tired of reading a long and rather pointless review, so I'll end by saying this is a cool story. If you're still on ff.net, well... what more can I say but keep writing?

The first half of your story was pretty entertaining. If another had written something similar, I probably would consider it a bad fic. However, since you're the one who wrote it, and since I know your purposely writing this way, the whole 'bad fic' concept is lost.

Nice short story at the bottom too. For obvious reasons, it didn't have the deepest plot I've seen, but the originality and unpredictability kept me wondering what was going to happen next. The battle scene was also well written and kept me entertained. So all in all, good stuff.

--ReignOfTerror aka Born4Glory--

x_X;; The sad thing about this story is that - even the first couple blatent at writing a horrible story - you're really still just about the best author out there... that's how much people suck at writing DBZ. *dramatic sigh* >_> Although I can't say I'm any better... XD

THAT WAS THE DUMBEST, FUNNIEST DBZ STORY I HAD EVER READ!
GREAT!!

Your "worst DBZ story ever" turned out to be very funny in its randomness and chaotic organization. I agree with the reviewer Ki-Ball, who wrote that even what you perceive to be your worst is still pretty entertaining!

Whoohoo! I love pointless humor! LOL!!!

Nice.. yeah :)

HAHA! I liked it! =]