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Reviews For: Implausible, Irrational, and Just Plain Luna - Reviews: Page 1 of 4

Carol Rodrick
2008-04-28
ch 1,
abuseI love this story, is so cute and delicate. I really wish there were more Sevs/Luna stories around, they are such an unusual couple. Well done! ;)
Lady Almaren
2008-04-01
ch 1,
abuseThis is so sweet and touching. And those are the only words I can think of right now but it was really really good.
glassdragon2
2008-02-18
ch 1,
abuseWow... just wow. The first couple paragraphs had me laughing my head off, the fantastical placed you created was so... beautiful, it was so like Luna, yet you expanded her character and gave her so much depth. And then the scene with Severus and the ghost... it was poignant and I confess I was a little misty eyed. For this span to occur in about 6,0 words is absolutely amazing. I love your story. It is absolutely beautiful. Keep up the fantastic work!
Robin007
2008-02-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseI've never been a fan of SS/LL, until now.
Mariel Nightstalker
2008-01-24
ch 1,
abuseoh, i liked this so much! Luna was Luna, and Snape was Snape in Love, something that isn't easy to find.

The idea of creating a 'happy place' out of magic is very intriging to me and I liked your exploration of the idea.

Also, I found Blinky the Frog quite charming. What was your inspiration for him? I loved the idea of a frog wearing swimming trunks, by the way :)

Mariel
I'm Just Drawn That Way
2007-12-07
ch 1,
abuseWild! and Weird! But... Wonderful!
Nessa Blade
2007-09-19
ch 1,
abuseI can not begin to describe how much i love this story. Great idea, nicely written and the ending almost had me in tears. Let me just go out on a limb and as you for a sequel, and if there is one let me know asap.

-Nessa
MyNameIsFred
2007-09-03
ch 1,
abuseWell, this is certainly the first Severus/Luna fic I have ever read. I will admit that I was skeptical, I mean come on, Severus Snape and Luna Lovegood? I decided to read this fic just to see if you could pull it off. Believe me you did more than that. This was amazingly in character and super sweet. I loved the transformation that Severus went under. Amazing job.
-Fred
purplerebecca
2007-08-23
ch 1,
abuseOh, this was so lovely and sweet. I can see her just taking his hand and leading him where-ever during the trial and after.
EmptyWord
2007-08-15
ch 1,
abuseExquisitely stunning work. The kiss still seemed a bit off-kilter, but everything else flowed like wine and honey. I love the dialogue and the concepts brought up. And that scene of absolution with Dumbledore outshone everything else. I'll have to come back and reread this. You give both these characters every bit their due.
tambrathegreat
2007-07-14
ch 1,
abuseSo good. It almost made me cry when Severus met Dumbledore. Great story.
CSebastiene
2007-07-12
ch 1,
abuseThe Treacle Tart(I love your penname!),

This was beautifully, beautifully written! When Severus had to face Albus, my eyes were filling with tears, and I wasrather like Severus in that a single, solitary tear left its track on my cheek. Luna is such a fabulous character, isn't she? And the idea of a relationship between her and Severus is very intriguing. I've never seen that particular pairing before, but it's going to join a list of my favourite pairings.

I thoroughly enjoyed this; thank you very much for sharing it with all of us readers in the fanfiction realm.

~C. Sebastiene (Seba)
Tryptophan36
2007-07-03
ch 1,
abuse"If he were to also find that he could no longer make small children cry, then he’d have to find new hobbies and that was a bit heart breaking."
Hooray for Snape! LOVE!
Wow, I never would have pictured this pairing. Wonderful idea. Well done!
Nessd
2007-06-20
ch 1,
abuseThat was a lovely story. I've only been able to find a handful of other SS/LL fics (and when I say handful, I mean, at the most, 4).

I like how you worked Luna's ability to see what others don't, what they refuse to see, into your fic. I also like how you took Severus' grief, guilt, and pain and allowed him to face them.

All in all, an excellent fic.

Thanks for sharing.
Catti666
2007-05-27
ch 1,
abuse: ) that was a real beautiful story! I do like Luna pairings a lot though there really isn't too many of them that I know of. There is one another about Luna and Draco and I just wish people would write more about her. I never thought much about her before fifth book and since then... I just like her. Maybe I'm in a romantic mood but that was a masterpiece! I used to have a ridiculous idea of pairing Hermione and Severus(still insistingly so) and that is a fresh idea in itself. Just loving it!
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