Good update quick! i feel sorry for sam she lost her dad!

Hint taken. It would be interesting to find out how you'll explain about Jacob. Will the cat be let out the bag? Can't wait to see what you've got planned next. best wishes, Bacardi.

I really did enjoy this one. It's nice to see that someone had the guts to tackle this story line. Keep up the great work, Bacardi.

please continue this story, it has a lot of potential! So i guess this story is based in the future, since Jacob is apparently dead, and it gives an interesting viewpoint. I want to know the changes! Please update soon!

-Rin

Cool idea. :) Looking forward to more soon!

yes pleas keep up the good work I am going to read chapter two now *S* verry good idea and well carried out in plot and realistic actions . you have what I like to call gaps in your story though not stuff you forgot but stuff you could have put in . more detail or information. just consider that a personal preference because your style is just fine as far as little ole me is concerned. keep upt the good work!

Love the concept...Run with it! I actually did kind of wonder why the SGC wasn't recruiting potential hosts for the 'okra' There are lots of people in Jaimie's situation.

jaime selmak. interesting way to put it. i like this and i hope more comes soon.

I like this chapter, especially the last line. Could you put in a note about what season this is supposed to take place in, or if this is an alternate reality? I'm a little confused. Please update. :)

Definitely keep going. I really like this.

Just found this story. It rocks my socks. Update soon please!

Nice. Though i've always veiwed Jaime as a masculine name, probably because it's the Spanish form of James. You wouldn't call a girl James, would you? ;;shrug::

This is really good! Keep writing!

this is good! Keep up the good work!

Very interesting, please continue!