Oh dear. My computer is basically shite, and has taken about ten minutes to load this page, and I am still grinning from your lovely fic. The style is brilliant - just the right mix of dry and eloquent and simple and fast paced. You've definitely captured the spirit of the show, which is hard to do in writing. And the characters are beyond perfect. All-around win.

please continue.

Let it be known that there is interest.

You captured the characters very well. Thank you.

I have interest in a continuation. So... Jim's a hard-body, eh? Nice. :)

Hey! I would actually love to see the picture of Jim and Pam (or John and Jenna...) in Entertainment Weekly.

Please continue this story. I like the mini golf idea, it sounds like something the show would do. Plus you have Michael's lame jokes down.

Please continue! I really like your story.

He! I like this a lot. Really funny, really in character, and totally hot!

Please continue I loved it. Great job on the Characters

OH, well DONE! I have so many favorite parts: Dwight and Angela are so creepy; Michael's obsession with Ryan is disturbing; "ancestration" is just perfect; Pam's comment about Bob Vance made me laugh out loud...

...and of course the hardness that had nothing to do with the ground.

I'd love to read more!

Hey, this is awesome! I love it! Totally like Micheal, and I am a huge JimPam fan! More!

"I will continue if there is enough interest."

Um, YEAH! That was awesome, totally funny, with lots of JAM. You are a great writer, and I can't wait to see more. You captured all of the characters beautifully, true to form.

Oh Lord! I can't imagine Micheal and mini-golfing. Hey, and if you could pass that ad and pic over I'd be grateful. This was an excellent read. Keep going! I wanna know what happens next! Interesting tid-bit about the Wave Runners. Roy's just a prick!

hey loved your fic please continue!