Ah,so wonderfully written.

if not a bittersweet story

wow seeing as this was writin at 4 am in line for tickits i thougth it was going to suck but i was wrong this rocks

Composed of such clever intrigue, it was truly my pleasure to read this fiction. There was not an excess of plot justification, nor redundancy where emphasis was not necessary, which is wonderful for a short-fic. I am delighted by your wit, and do believe that with time and experience, your writing will be very apt.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

chapter 2 roger finds out Dorothy has human part just an idea

I am not a fan of A Roger/Dorothy romance, but this story made me actually like the idea. Well written! You really took liberties with the character of Dorothy and I respect that. this is one of the best Big O stories I've yet read.

Aw! That was fun!_ Now all we need are some wedding bells!_- I enjoyed the fic very much!

Wow this is great! And it makes Roger look very sexy...ahh sorry. But love your style, everything and the meaning of the sentence were well connected. Great!

A very nicely written story. There is no superfluous language in it, and is the more effective for its spare description. I like it very much.

O_O
Wow...
Nicely written, no errors, successful quickfic, just bump up the rating..

Awesome

That was cute! Hahaha Dorothy's double-jointed

O_O Wow. All I can say is, if this is what we get, you should stand in line for tickets more often! _ This was very lovely, very well done. I really can't think of a "bad" thing to say about it, the characters were spot-on, the story was handled well... No, I can't find anything to say but "wonderful!" If this was your first lemon, darlin', I'd sure love to see more!

S: Oh, it was beautiful! You definetly deserve your spot on my Favorite Authors List!

great story! keep writing!