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| Girl-who-sings-the-blues 2007-02-16 ch 2, | abuse...Freaky stuff...Oh, ad I thought the two characers were ..famillar...Oh well--UPDATE!-- |
| Girl-who-sings-the-blues 2007-02-16 ch 1, | abuseAh...Always the cliff hanger! |
| Randomboulder 2006-07-23 ch 2, | abuseWah, I think lots of people here are like me and appreciate leaning towards romance. XP This was good, though I hadn't expected something from FMA. XD Maybe you should say in the summary that there's something of a crossover. Why do Ed and Al have different names? Or are they like aliases? Well anyway, you better make Sophia heal Albel before he gets an ugly lump on his head. =( Don't normally go for crossovers, but I like this. ^^ |
| Monochromatic Pylon 2006-05-25 ch 2, | abuseHaha.. I'm kinda shock about the FMA back there, it's unexpected..Anyway I like Sophia's personality in this story. Keep it up! |
| lin-ko 2006-05-12 ch 2, anon. | abuseo.O the heck with fma?! okay... that was really strange but yea now things are either going to be interesing or really confusing >< least there was action in it, a good amount. hope you update soon... ... uh.. yea... |
| Dragon Chyld 2006-05-12 ch 2, | abuseSo it's a cross over of sorts. Yeah, I figured it out. Nice action, but it never hurts to throw some romance into the action. Sophia's always got her healing symbology and about this time I can see her using it on Albel - unless she's too far away from him. Of course, I can see her using it on Davorien too. |
| Dragon Chyld 2006-04-22 ch 1, | abuseIt's a funny image to see Albel spying on Sophia. Albel's first thoughts sounded like he was trying to find a reason to watch her...um, could he be in denial? :) I like the way Sophia is intelligent. She's still unsure about herself and her abilities but tries anyway. Just a little of my view if you bring in OCs. Give them life - they can't be too perfect and they have to be 'human' enough for us to connect with them, or mysterious enough to intrigue us. |