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Reviews for: Children of the Sisterhood
carmabell713
2006-11-03 . chapter 4
Wow that was a long chapter but i loved it! I don't think however that the pants will fit them trying to be someone they're not. but hey just a suggestion. ;-}
GreatAmericanAuthor
2006-10-28 . chapter 3
The chapter was great!I so totally love Tiffany's character. I've read through all chapters and she's my fav, closely followed by Delia.Please, please, please keep writing + post soon!
Norwegianchick101
2006-05-15 . chapter 2
y do i have the feeling Carmen's pregnant? and another premonition-the pants are so totally in the attic!
coolmarauders
2006-05-13 . chapter 2
block paragraph of dom!! I like the characterizations of the girls, but SPACE BETWEEN DIALOGUE. YES.

and also, I would suggest getting a beta, because in both these chapters there have been quite a few mistakes that just are a little annoying. Like "teh" or "eh" instead of "the." They aren't major mistakes, but they are irritating ones.

prongs
buckichick22
2006-05-10 . chapter 2
Who is Tiffany's father? When did Lena meet Mike? Who is Carmen's husban. What happened to Brian with Tibby?
Emily Giraffe
2006-05-06 . chapter 2
Second Chapter: oh my word. Two huge blocks of text. No offense, but that makes people not want to read it. Since you're supposed to make a new paragraph for each new speaker, its kind of.. not well written, in that aspect. But its a good story, just try to make the next chapter easier to read!
Emily Giraffe
2006-05-04 . chapter 1
pretty good! keep it up.
K.M. Major
2006-05-04 . chapter 1
Dear Korea Gal,
This story is wonderful! What a creative idea! I look forward to the next part of it, so please finish it soon!
~K.M. Major
carmabell713
2006-05-01 . chapter 1
I LOVE IT! I love everything about it. Esspecially that the I can totally see that girls acting that way when they are older! Like I said I LOVE IT! Keep up the great work!
Giraffes are not emo
2006-04-25 . chapter 1
I loved this story, and I can't wait until the next chapter. Write on!
The one the only PROBIE
2006-04-24 . chapter 1
Ok first of all i found this story mundane, Discombobulating and ubquitated. I find these stories quite repulsive. WHO THE HELL WANTS TO WEAR PANTS SOMANY OTHERS HAVE WORN? i mean hello higeine and another thing what kinda of pants fit all sizes any way? I mean come on you expect me to believe that one size fits all!?:O IS IT JUST ME? HAS THE WORLD GONE CRAZY? or is it the aliens? Apart from that, good story. >_>
Bee Vreeland
2006-04-22 . chapter 1
This is a REALLY great story! There's just enough information about each character, and I love how the girls aren't TOO much like their moms. However, do you really think that the Sisterhood wouldn't have seen each other in thirteen years? I don't know if you have an idea for that. Otherwise, brilliant story!
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