Wow, I'm very pleased to hear from you again! If you want to rewrite this story, I say full steam ahead, and I'll definitely be around to read it - looking forward to these character and story developments you mentioned!

Jeez, man, this story's just...wonderful. It's got a nice blend of action, humor (Jax telling Violet that NO, SHE CANNOT BE THE STAR killed me), and a deeper seriousness that's really well executed. The pokemon have much more interesting personalities, their own reasons for joining, and each bring something to the cast, so it feels less like a cockfight scenario and far more like they're an actual team.
The writing is excellent, and as a whole, it's really fun to read.

I could go on and on, but as a whole this story just really stands out amongst all the rest. I really want to see what else is held in store for the dysfunctionally dynamic...quintet. I sincerely hope for this story getting picked back up again.

Rory apparently has an obsession with Kakuna. Huh. Okay, just one thing; I think it's Metal Claw, not steel. Other than that, this was pretty good.

I want more Flying Kakuna. I had always wished I could do that in the games... heh...
Rory sounds pretty cool. Again, yay Charmander!

Aw. Poor Jaxie. Funny as usual. Violet's a bit too stupid to be on a pokemon journey without some, ah, help. I like Beedrill. Poor things. Getting set on fire. But I'm rambling; well done.

Bravo, I say to you, BRAVO!
This is hysterical. Violet's completely believeable, and as for the fact that I love Charmander too, I support her fully. Will she get a not-grumpy Charmander? Or will Jax's heart melt?

Leroy...Jenkins!

Man, did I miss this story. I still haven't written my own yet...I haven't done much writing of any sort lately.

Well, let's see here...I have to admit, I love the megatons of action because of it's well-writtenness, however...there are STILL points in your story where you're running on a bit in the descriptive word department. Maybe it's just the difference of our styles, I dunno.

Also, I was waiting on Violet to go kablooey. Woo!

And finally...I have myself a new hat. Not a panama hat, but a floppy, wide-brimmed bucket number.

I bring this up because I am vaguely Violet-like in my possessiveness of it. I blame you. ^_^

Keep on keepin' on, and I'll make sure you see 100 reviews. Even if I have to write them all myself.

I'll finish it later, but it's really good.

All right! You're back with a new chapter! The time was worth it 'cause I really liked this one. Eko and Sarai, Zeeg, the 'newer' sides to Violet's character, the humour, action and drama, I'm inspired to write!

I love it! You did a super job!! Keep up the good work.

Hah. Oh man, I must admit, that I will miss Violet's antics with the Kakuna-Zeeg, but something tells me that Zeeg will still be great! Nice to see the "Rescue Zeeg" arc is over. It was actually getting a little tiring. Now then, onto the rest of the squads adventures in Mount Moon. I really don't mind there being long chapters. Just more for me to read. Heh, just out of curiousity how many more chapters do you think the Violet and the team will be in Mount Moon?

Another impressive chapter, and I must admit, the evolved (and egolicious) Zeeg came flying out of left field, so creative points for you.

The bad news is, you're still running on a bit...

And the other bad news is, since I had to wipe my hard drive, a I lost my story. Now I have to rewrite it.

..Again. -_-

You were? Sorry, I'm not good at keeping up with reviewing. I rarely have anything interesting to say anyway. I'm happy that you notice them at all. ^-^
Anyway,as usual, good chapter. I'm really liking Eko and Zeeg. You won't have to worry about me killing you for its length - the more there is to read, the better, right?

I finally caught up to all these chapters! In the beginning, when Rikki said "not go on an Easter Egg hunt for a stinkin' cocoon" I was thinking 'GASP'. I can't believe she doesn't appreciate Zeeg that much! She totally deserved the net...

But then Zeeg evolved...into an egotistical Zeeg! I love egotistical people (no idea why) which makes Zeeg even MORE AWESOME! (At this rate I'll start a Zeeg fanclub...unless it's already started?)

See ya, and cheers! (clapping for Agz and Keaton the Black Jackal)

This chapter was...AMAZING! I love Eko, she's almost as great as Zeeg! "We stripped them of their manhood" hahaha!
I'd write more in this review, but I'm going to read the next chapter now...and I feel Zeeg-deprived! See ya, and cheers!