ussop's acting like he doesn't care about zoro seeing as he forgot about him. thatg was a funny part though.

loved this chap.

i love your writing style. is the purple haired woman Nojiko? (i'm probably spelling it wrong)

well, i don't appreciate the cliffy, espiecally because i can't remember what happened in this episode. (insert F-word here)

do me a SMALL favor. can you stop bolding? it's kinda annoying.

ok, so this is following that episode. all right. what was going to be changed?

hey, sorry, i lost track of time.

anyway, you're a good writer, but i got confused at some parts... don't explain. it's hard to get. only time can help.

So this Shadow, is he/she a guy? and what's he to Nami? (i got confused before in author notes.

bye.

Ah nice but don't bold your words in a story. It's very annoying to read. ^_^