wow, this is really good. ive only read one chapter but i can tell, this is really good. i keep pictureing keisuke as wang from tekken, but then i slap myself. ow, my cheek is sore.

This is really good!

lol

hey write fast the next one

NARUHINA 4EVER!

Let's see... We need lots of random interference, kyuubi's evil plan to get out, Sasuke using a desperate jutsu to stop Kyuubi, Naruto using syncrozation in a new way, maybe syncing with Hinata, and the most important of all... THE UCHIHA'S DEATH!

Kill the council! Kill the council! KIll the council!

...You lied to me...
(Crying sounds)

Whoa! Yeah! Street war! Who doesn't love a street war?

WHERE WAS THE Blank gumbi that would train Naruto how to use the secret art of the pervert to stop drawing blanks?

Absolutely spectacular story, almost zero grammatical mistakes, a compelling and original plot, believable OC's that bring more life to the story.

(I personally feel there is nothing worse then a super powerful OC that fixes everything, which implies the original cast isn't capable of fixing their own problems, effectively hindering growth of the rest of the canon characters, But you did not do this and made realistic OC's that would fit perfectly in the Naruto universe)

This story is excellent in nearly every regard. It is paced very well. Contains abit of everything from humor, drama, and romance. And on the subject of the romance, It's done extremely well. There is no rushed segments with Naruto and Hinata's developing relationship. It's head and shoulders a level beyond most Naruto and Hinata fiction on this website which usually more often then not having them confess the 3 words by the end of the second chapter. So the way every thing gradually builds up and the way you such detail and emotion into this writing shows you have an amazing talent for this.

You are most deserving of this praise.

I am adding this story to my favorites list, you are now one of my favorite authors, and I much anticipation to start reading the second story "War of the Eyes"

I wish you great success and hope you eventually complete "Vision for the Future"

(I usually only read completed stories on this website, as I feel there is nothing more jarring then getting into an excellent story and have it suddenly end without knowing when it may be updated or eventually completed)

I am looking forward on starting on the sequel tomorrow.

I thank you very much for this highly entertaining read to capture my attention for many hours on end without a break.

Normally I'd try to find a means to provide constructive criticism and point out any mistakes to be corrected, however I have not found any glaring issues, and I am exceptionally pleased that this story has been flawless from beginning to end.

Thank you again for creating such an incredibly enjoyable reading experience.

Sakura and Hinata bonding is an unusual choice. I don't think many people have called attention to their parallel problems as you have here. I hope to see a friendship develop.

Once again, I think that if you're using Sennin in place of Sannin, the line "the three sennin" would be redundant, as Sannin means three ninja already. And although Jiraiya can be considered a sennin, as he uses sage techniques, Orochimaru and Tsunade do not.

Keisuke's seal techniques are interesting. He seems to have become more aware of his surroundings since the prologue, although he was still pretty aware for a blind man then. Could these new abilities be an extension of his previous awareness, his "sightless seeing?"

By the way, Sennin means sage. And while referring to Orochimaru as a Snake Sennin is exactly inaccurate, you were probably going for Sannin, am I right?

An good beginning! The fact that you chose to set it when Naruto was seven is an interesting choice. I'm sure I'll find out why, once I read on.

Also, the byakugan being related to demons is also rather intriguing. Since the sharingan is related to it distantly, I presume there's a connection with them as well...

I'm glad that you're using Japanese phrases too. The casual reader may be turned off by it (as I've learned in my own writing) but having taken some classes I enjoy seeing it in fics.

I'm looking forward to reading this story. Gabzillaz speaks very highly of your work, so I thought I'd check it out.

P.S. Keisuke of the Grave is a totally awesome nickname.

Very nice. Very nice indeed!