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| Flame Rising 2008-05-22 ch 1, | abuseLet’s play a game, shall we? Yes? Fantastic. This game is called “Things That Can Write Better Than You”. The rules are simple. Please correctly select which choice can write better than you: A. My left testicle B. A toilet-full of chunky diarrhea C. An inbred midget clown who swims in choice B D. All of the above If you chose the correct answer, D, then you have won the following prize: A spot in my coveted C2 “Stories A Turd Out of My ** Could Write Better” (which, strangely enough was not one of the choices). Don’t despair! Even if you didn’t choose correctly, I will be kind enough to give you that prize anyway. Who said I don’t have a heart? Congratulations! Please continue to avoid the dictionary as if it were an oozing, puss-filled sore on an old hooker’s a.s.s. And good grammar? Well, run away from it like it’s a festering syphilitic itch you just can’t scratch in public. Or in words you can understand: your fic sucks donkey balls, and that’s what you wanted me to think, right? Because otherwise, I’d have to believe this was an actual attempt at writing and laugh the crap right out of myself. Best regards, F/R |
| aga04 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseNice idea, only seem strange that you use the older F14A and not the more up-to-date F14D. Besides, Bombcat is a nick for a A2G configuration, because all the version of the old mighty cat can still use full A2A payload with AIM-54 Phoenix, but the old avionics puts some limits to targeting at short distance, it needs a very skilled RIO. In that case, a F18 is better, due to more agile frame and better avionics (it's still underpowered, IMHO) |
| FreyOfDavis 2007-04-14 ch 1, | abuseI really hope you'll continue with this. As a big fan of Area 88 (and writer of an Area 88 story in progress), I'm drooling over the thought of 100 Tomcats vs. the rebel air force. One big furball chapter, that's all I ask for. Question: are you going to have the Tomcats carry Phoenix missiles? They're the key to a Tomcat's long-range engagement ability, but they're mighty expensive. |
| FOG3 2007-03-27 ch 1, | abuseWhat's with the F-14 > then F-22A nonsense? The thrust to weight on a F-22A is higher, the sensors are so widely distrubted and good it's been called a mini-EWACs, it can fly clean with its normal full A2A payload, and it's kicked butt on every 4th Gen fighter it's been put up against in testing including the F-14's kissing cousin the F-15. The F-14s is a higher performance interceptor with the labor intensive maintenance bill to go with it. |
| KnighteWolfe 2006-09-12 ch 1, | abuseOH YEAH! AREA 88 FICS! WICKED COOL! So far this story is off to a very damn good start. I Like it I Love It I Want More of IT! One really quick note, Mickey flew Phantoms before he flew Tomcats. Keep up the great work! Knightewolfe (and remember the Tomcat Motto: 'Anytime Anywhere, Baby!!) Vigilantes 4 Life! |
| Iceman 2006-07-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseFirst, damn, that's a lot of Tomcats, nearly a seventh of all the Tomcats produced. Secondly, why not have them fly the far superior F-14D Super Tomcat to Area 88? |
| Timex 2006-05-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseAnother Area 88 story eh. Good one. Though Ashlan is suppose to be Asran. |
| Groove 2006-04-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseAnother interesting Area 88 fanfic to read! |
| Ominae 2006-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting to see another Area 88 fanfic on the rise. Is this based on the 2004 TV version or the OVA? Just to let you know, it's also originally known as Asran, but those who've seen or heard of Area 88 can also refer to the Asran as Aslan. Be looking forward to the other parts of this story. I also have an Area 88 story in here too. |
| WillTheWatcher 2006-04-22 ch 1, | abuseHey. I don't know what Area 88 is but this story looks promising. :) |