When I first started reading, I saw the pairing of Hermione and Voldermort and thought it was utterly ridiculous. However, your writing has been amazing and you kept the characters truly to themselves, which made the story better. Love your writing. :) I actually enjoyed this story very much! KEEP WRITING!!

are you going to make a sequel for this? i would love to read it if you do . this story wa very good.

Oh... you MUST continue this!

:D Love,
J.

Excellent!

Love Sonia :)

Interesting, , , very interesting. Hm.

Update soon!

Interesting to say the least. The plot was great. I loved the way you wrote this. I really did. Honestly, great job.

~Tori

All right, I've gotta stop. I hate when Hermione becomes a slavering follower of The Almighty Dark Lord. She doesn't strike me as stupid, yet people always write her as pathetically subservient to Voldy. Is that the only possible way they could have any semblance of a relationship? Sigh. I'm not saying that I don't like your writing, I just hate when women let men walk all over them. Besides that, Hermione acts like Voldemort deserves praise and understanding. She can be compassionate without fostering his ridiculous sense of entitlement.
Er, sorry for ranting. As I said, it's not you, it's the pairing. Not like I wasn't warned, right?

He...peed on her? Wow, that's...wow. Seriously, he sure is acting injured and self-righteous for all that he did and wanted to do. I wish Hermione would kill him at the end of the story, otherwise he'll probably escape and kill everybody else.

Voldy sure is whiny. Boo hoo, everyone who does anything bad is JUST LIKE ME blah, blah. I wonder if he believes that tripe he's spitting out?

That was good.

I like this. You explore Voldemort so beautifully without pretty-ing up his thoughts. I always knew he wouldn't stay as a muggle. It was forshadowed when he discovered that he could still speak in Parseltongue. He found that connection to the wizarding world and he clinged to it.

Sinfully beautiful, and not as dark as I had originally thought it would be. Makes me think of the human race. I am the cynic of my Ethics class; however, I prefer to call myself the Realist.

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"by the efforts of "Albus Dumbledore", Harry Potter, Ronald Weasley, Hermione Granger, "Albus Dumbledore", Severus Snape, Remus Lupin, and Minerva McGonagall"

You have Dumbledore's their twice.

A very interesting story. It was completely unexpected from my side to find anything like this.
Amazing story.

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Very unique and twisted idea, I really enjoyed it!

it was an ok story but the ending sucked.