good
angsty
insightful

im a huge dramione and everything-iv read or am planning 2 read the rest of ur stories on that subject. but i relly liked this. i think it shows how he really tends 2 feel on the subject, and then again i also like angsty stuff...but it was still really good, as is the rest of ur hp stuff (i dont read the rest) keep it up!

i was thinking of copy pasting my fave verse here, the most meaningful
but to be honest, the whole thing is just fantastic
those emotions are real, and his thoughts true and valid
losing (a) parent(s) is tough! and he is just a boy
my, you ARE going to make me cry!

aw that's cute =]

You have a real talant for writing and I love everything you write. Keep it up.

great thats the only way to discribe it

wow interesting. me likey me likey alot

Wow! This is really good! It seems to be true to the books as well. Cool. ; )

oh oh oh. i do like it. very nice.

So... angsty and sad and tragic and SO BLOODY DOWNRIGHT MORBID!
But it's good after all.

serpentine17ice

it's really good... it could even be made into a song if the words were changed around a little... :) keep on writing
best of luck!

I loved it! And I do hope you feel better.

xoxoxox,
Hannah

Angsty. I like it. No love it. Favourite Stories.

that is an extremely good poem about harry!

Very nice, I think you did a great job of getting into Harry's head. Lovely.