OMG U HAVE TO UPDATE THIS! IT IS REALLY GOOD!

This is a really good story... kind of like an eye to the past...

I think this is one of few (it might be the only) stories about Ororo as a child back in Cairo. There is no one better to do it than you.

Quite involved and interesting. I cannot wait for the next parts. Great job so far Ebonbird. I like it a lot.

I am so excited! I have always wanted to read something about Ororo's past, and this is so beautifully written! Everything is crystal clear ... I hope this encourages you to write more, and quickly!