Why? What did Shino ever do to you? And WTF was up with Kiba getting pregnant?!

"hey everyon! IM SEXY!"
XD
too funny..

o.o

You killed Shino! How dare you! I will forever loathe you! Ok, now on a happier note the writing was realy. . .Somewhat good. I'm doing a Shino story, just need time, lots and lots of time to write it though.

I hate you! why'd you kill shino?

great job

OMFG SHINO DIED! *tear* well da ending sucked lmao but it was a good story ^^ but...WHY'D U MAKE SHINO DIE!? WAH! lolz

Can u plz write a sequel...PLZ... I just luvv the story and BTW>YOU ALSO SUCK CAUSE YOU KILLED SHINO-KUN!

the funny thing is...the two-tailed is a cat lol

1- Tanuki (raccon type thing aka Shukakku)
2- Cat
3- Turtle and/or Kappa
4- Unkown (mentioned but not by species)
5- not listed
6- not listed
7- not listed
8- not listed
9- Fox (Kyuubi)

he stood there for a minuet? like...the whole thing or just part of it? cause some minuets can be pretty long! And how did he know when the minuet was over? Did he hear it playing in his head? I ist confused TvvT

chjngvubhjs.
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SHINO DIED!
Nuu
im sad now

OHMIGAWDYOUKILLEDSHINO! -cries/sobs- YOU MAKE ME SO SAD! THIS STORY WAS ALL HAPPY AND FLUFFY AND CUTE WITH A SEXY DEMON AND THEN YOU KILL. SHINO.! ...only one cookie for you! I was gonna give you TWO! ...-sniff- Shino... Shiobu was kawaii though! ^^ This story was pretty good, though the ending saddened me. Either way, not too bad.
=^.^=

DO NOT KILL SHINO-OR ANYONE ELSE.

omg...WHY DID SHINO HAVE TO DIE?!?!?!?! NO... *emoness* you're such a bastard- er... **- er whatever you are! why did it have to end that way?! i feel so sad... and my lover is asleep so she cant really help me any... oh wait, gotta go... she wants me! bye!
^.^

you cant kill youreself!(refers to the beginning of chappie 5) to tell you the truth i dissapprove of suicide more than anything (yes i stole that quote from trigun) but anywho, i'll read the rest of your story now... bye!