I love this story! Your writing is one I barely see on fanfiction. Everything is paced just right and the story is so realistic, if they were in a normal reality instead of star wars I could really picture this hapening. I can't wait to read your next chapter and so on.So please keep writing!

So, as I was reading this, I noticed that you hadn't updated this story in a year and almost 8 months. However, this story is way too interesting to let it fall into nothingness. For this reason, I'm writing this review, hoping against hope that because of it you'll get off your _ (fill in the adjective you feel is your reason for not writing) butt and finish the story. Please? From one desperate slash fan to another?

-Crick

Qoftheday: "I'm so full of love it deeply sickens me." -Motion City Soundtrack

Seriously? It's incomplete? Too bad... Well, I hope you get back to this someday as it's a pretty damn good story. I think you write the characters well, and I especially like how both Obi-Wan and Anakin have their own sets of friends that you can really believe in.

I absolutely love the way that you've written this. I imagine this story as a poster, one that's pretty, but a little dark, and fun to look at, advertising something really cool; that's how it feels to read.

Woah, hot. Nice ending there ;). Pretty interesting AU already. It made me laugh to see that Quinlan wanted Mace next.

Aw! So cute!! Please update soon!!

xox

This is absolutely fantastic! And I love, love, LOVE how you write Quinlan ^^ Brilliant story, can't wait to see it continued.

Your English is extremely good. I'm trying to translate some of my fics into French, but it isn't going very well.

Peace out
~TSD

OMG I love it. And I certainly hope you write more! Plus I totally get the whole sin city feel only you know...in a happier manner. Keep it up!

I love this stroy so much! please! I bed you come back and finish it!

First of all...I love this fic! I saw it the first time a the Ewan/Hayden comm on LJ but well I sorta lost track of it.

Anyways I love these sorts of AUs. I've got a SW goes OUr World kind of fic going too..it's not slash though and probably not as good as yours.

Love your characterization and how you're taking thisng between Obi and Ani slowly.

See, here's the deal. I read as soon as the chapter is posted, and then I think my brain explodes from the sheer brilliance and hotness and it takes me a good month to pull it all back together in my head to write you something resembling a review.

I think that perhaps YOU may be the death of me someday! This chapter was so hot AND so funny, and that's such a wonderful combination. I LOVE this AU so much, and how all the characters fit so well into their new roles. That party scene was a scream, particularly bc of Quinlan and his quick wit. Honestly, you need to trademark him, and Quin/Mace, or something, because it is just sensational! From Quin pointing out that "their baby" had grown up (haha!) to Mace calling Obi-Wan to freak about sleeping with Quinlan...so awesome!

I think what I love about this Anakin and Obi-Wan, and especially this chapter, is the very lack of angst and wangst between them--they are so at ease with each other and each other's life. And kill me dead now for that phone call, because the glasses alone did me in, but then throw in Anakin's dirty talk and hello? Deader than dead. You're the master of Anakin and Obi-Wan hotness, of this I have no doubt!

Again, I'm sorry for being so late with the review, because I did love it so.

^^ That really great! I love it!

your story is ... I don't what to say!

I love the characters, the relation between them, I love the story! (it's really interresting!) ^^
And the humor who was present in all the text!

I encourage you to continue!
(I don't know if it's correct to say that, but afterall I am not english, so I hope you forgive my mistakes! ^^ (and i hope you understand what I have trying to say!)XD

GREAT GREAT GREAT! ^o^

*brain implodes*

Mace and Quinlan! YAY!

Obi-Wan and Anakin DOUBLE YAYS OF HOTNESS WOT YEAH!

*smothers you with loves* Yays for otps!

*shuffles in late with the reading*

Monchy, this was positively adorable. I love how you manage to mix the intrigue and furthering of the plot with such sweet interludes with Anakin and Obi-Wan. I adore his cat already as well. *sniggles* Yoda. That is awesome.

I love this ending scene between the two of them especially. It's not a perfect and warm night or anything that's stereotypical romance, but they're still happy just curled up together. I think thats positively lovely.

*smiles* I needed this tonight to help me feel better about JT. *loves you to death*.

*goes to read next chapter*

Let me set a scene- I've just woekn up on Sunday morning, no one else is awake, so I have breakfast and decide I should probably check my e-mail becasue I haven't in a while.

And there's a message there from

I would have squealed with excitement, but that would have woken everybody up, so I did a little happy dance in my chair and settled down to read.

Monchy, what can I say? Words of praise come to mind, but I'm not sure they would be enough. As usual, a fantastic addition to a fantastic story. I will be heartbroken when this one ends, just as I was when "The Lover" came to its unavoidable close.

I'm eagerly anticipating the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Lots of love, Piress